請問這句翻成英文 會對教授不禮貌嗎?

Question

事情是這樣的

女友的音樂主修指導教授是歪果仁

當時女友為了逼自己加強英文才選擇這個教授

結果就此讓自己陷入雞同鴨講的深淵 囧囧囧

上學期成績出來，她發現她的主修只有85分

但其他同學都說那個外籍教授的成績一向打得很高

所以她想問教授為什麼她的成績只有85分呢?是哪裡出了問題?

( 她聽力ok，但只能做比較簡單的交談 囧 )

所以我想這樣幫她翻成英文 不知道是否妥當

professor, I wonder if why I got 85 score in last term?

Did I do something wrong?

because I got lower score between my classmate

請問這樣翻 會對教授不禮貌嗎?

因為不想讓教授以為她在要成績，是真的只想知道自己哪裡不好

或是不曉得大家還有沒有比較好的翻法呢?! 謝謝

Answer 1

最佳解答

各位專家研究生注意啊!

首先, 你是要寫信給他, 還是直接當面找他? 我兩個例子都給你吧.

先是寫信:

Dear Professor XXX,

First of all, I would like to thanks for your guiding in my lessons. In order to get more improvement in the next exam, may I know what area should I need to put more effort? Because my grade is only 85, could you please let me know which is my weakness part, and how can I make some improvement?

Thank you very much for your attention.

Please let me know when will you available to have a chat on that.

Your Sincerely,

XXX

然後是對話: (Y=你 P=Professor)

Y: Good morning/ Good afternoon/ Good Evening, Sir/Madam.

P: Oh, Hi, XXX. Are you looking for me?

Y: Yes, I am a bit confused about my score.

P: So, what's the problem?

Y: Well, I am wondering why I am scored at 85 only.

P: Babbabababababab.......

Y: Thank you very much for your time, and I reckon how I can get more improvement next time, thank you Sir/Madam.

我是住在Sydney的知識貧民, 歡迎找碴

Answer 2

To bravo :

我女友的主修是鋼琴，對英文不是很在行，但她也很努力加強英文這一塊了

因為那個教授的成績一向打很高，但她只得85，部分比她差的同學卻是88或90

我女友又是很追求完美的人，平時花在練琴的時數上也很驚人

所以她才想問教授是不是哪裡要加強? 絕對不是想要分數

因為音樂性的東西比較主觀，她當然會想知道自己到底哪裡出問題

再加上她英文會話上比較不ok，才請我詢問用英文怎麼講比較妥當

如果造成您的誤會，那很抱歉!

(就因為也怕讓教授有這樣的誤會，所以才會問各位前輩這樣會不會不禮貌)

Answer 3

奇怪的思想。如果是為了練習英文，那分數本就不該在意。

如果是為了學習，那你說的動機就不對了。

總之，矛盾。真的令人感覺只是要個好看的分數而已。

Answer 4

教授，我不知道如果我在上一屆的85得分為什麼？

我做錯了什麼？

因為我得到了我的同班同學之間的得分較低

Answer 5

歪果仁 = foreigner = 外國人, :-) ...

2012-03-22 08:47:18 補充：

poster! If you use "Professor 歪果仁" may cause the concern you have !

Answer 6

歪果仁是神呀？Is he nuts?

Answer 7

音樂系主修85分, 很高了!!

--- 過來人的經驗

Answer 8

professor, I wonder why my score is only 85 in last term?

would you give me some tips for getting high score?---------

Answer 9

我認為不會，當然去說的時候的態度也要好! 可以參考我重寫的這幾句!

Professor

The reason why I am here today is to find out the reason why my final grade was only 85%. I know I worked hard and was completely shocked to find my final grade so low. Can you please tell me the mistakes I made so I can avoid them in the future?

我想不要跟教授提起其它同學的成績比較好，重點是，你也不要讓教授覺得你跟本只是來浪費他的時間的，不想要成績，還是要有一點點想要要到更好的成績。祝你們好運!

Answer 10

Professor, I don't konw why I got 85 scores last term?

Because I got lower scores than others.

Did I do something wrong? I can't figure out why?

Could you tell me the reason?

2012-03-23 08:46:21 補充：

花了很多時間練習，但是仍舊把握不到要領。

I took a lot of time to practice, but it didn't make my skills better.

I don't know how to do? I'm so confused.

If any thing make you feel no good, please tell me.

Thank you very much.

參考資料： 5, 5