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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

一篇自己寫的中級英文作文

請問是否有哪裡有錯誤,或者用字不當,詞不達意呢?

題目:寫一封信給你的好友,內容包含:

1.你參加暑期遊學團到美國學英文,上課期間很快樂,也很輕鬆!

2.你參觀了很多著名的景點,

3.到美國不久後,你開始想念台灣的家人、KTV、食物和珍珠奶茶等。

4.希望明年兩人可以結伴參加遊學團

Dear Tiffany:

It is been long time do not hear you, how is everything going?

You know, I joined a borad study to america for English learning this summer.

Everything just worked fine.It was happy and easy.Also, I went to many famous markland.I felt so happy. Even thought, I started to miss my family, KTV,food and pearl milk tea from Taiwan when I just came here.Maybe next year you could join me, I think we must have more fun there. Just let me know what you think. Take care!

lovely

Tom

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請那些令人討厭的廣告可以不要出現嗎? 我已經檢舉你了

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  • 8 年前
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    It is been long time do not hear you,

    It has been a long time that I haven't heard from you,

    已經過了,hear from (vi 用法)一定要加介詞

    I joined a abroad study to America

    Everything just worked out fine.

    I went to many famous markland landmarks .

    I started to miss my family, KTV,food and pearl milk tea from Taiwan when I just came here . 不必要

    其餘部份good.

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