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哪位英文高手能看我翻譯的文章對不對

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危險早餐:熱狗堡+含糖飲料  熱狗因為是加工肉品,熱量及油脂都不低,而且含鹽分也比較多,再加上小朋友常愛擠上番茄醬、酸黃瓜等醬料,又會吃進更多鈉和熱量。一份加了這些醬料的熱狗堡,熱量達到500多卡,十分驚人。如果再喝一瓶含糖飲料,如奶茶或紅茶,熱量更可高達600~700卡,遠超過小朋友早餐的熱量需求。 健康早餐:三角飯糰+低脂鮮奶或優酪乳  三角飯糰一個大約200多卡,熱量及油脂含量相對比較低,而且包含碳水化合物及蛋白質,若再配上低脂奶類,這樣的組合受到營養師好評,也適合小朋友的食量。此外,有時候也可以考慮買低脂優格,搭配一顆茶葉蛋,蛋白質有助於頭腦清楚。 Dangerous Food: hotdog burger +beverage Cause of hot dog is a preserved food .Calories and total fat are so high, addition of children would like to add some ketchup or pickle, and it’s more sodium and calories. A hotdog burger had 500 calories what contain these all. It's amazing.If you drink more a beverage, just like milk tea or red tea, the calories will be reach 600~700 calories, far as calories demand of children. Healthy food: Onigiri+ Light milk or Light yogurt Kcal of an onigiri about 200, kcal and fat less, furthermore with carbohydrate and protein. The combine is well if you take it with light milk. Also suitable for kids appetite. Beside you can think of purchase light yogurt with a tea leaf, protein is helpful brain clearly. 連鎖早餐店危險早餐:鐵板麵+奶茶 不只油膩,而且淋上很多醬汁,口味太重,讓孩子吃進大量鹽分,容易口渴而更想喝高糖分的飲料。如果孩子想吃,建議每個月1~2次為限。另外,漢堡也要少吃,因為漢堡肉裡的肥肉比例高,油脂偏多。 Hibachi Noodle+milk tea Not only much sause but also salty.It will let kids got a lot of salt and easy thirsty to lead to want to drink high sugar beverage. IF kids want to eat it, advise limit 1~2 times of a month.By the way, cause of hamburger meat contain fat part, don’t eat it too much.

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●健康早餐:吐司夾蛋

  在連鎖早餐店最好選擇三明治類,而吐司夾蛋會比夾火腿好(火腿是加工品,鹽分比較多而且有添加劑。)如果是吐司夾鮪魚,要看店家是不是用油漬鮪魚,或者額外添加美乃滋調味,這樣油脂含量不少,也不宜常吃。

  此外,記得請老闆少抹一點奶油或其他抹醬,減少吃進去的油脂。如果能夾幾片生菜或番茄較好。另外,像早餐車賣的廣東粥也是不錯的選擇,但稀飯的水分較多,容易餓,所以建議再搭配喝一瓶鮮奶,或是吃一顆茶葉蛋,增加飽足感。

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Egg sandwich

In breakfast shop, best choice is sandwich. And egg sandwich is more better than ham sandwich (cause of ham is processed good, contain much salt and a lot of chemical thing.)

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If you want buy a tuna sandwich, don’t choose tuna in oil or added mayonnaise, the fat contain too much, not suitable for eat.

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By the way, you can ask store clerk don’t add much sauce, it can help you reduce eat fat. If you can add some vegetable or tomato is better. Moreover, Chinese food “Cantonese porridge” also a good choice, but porridge contain much water,

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it makes you easy hungry, so you may get one more milk or a tea egg to get more stuff.

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麵包店

危險組合:起酥麵包+調味乳

  起酥麵包的熱量更高達400多卡,油脂佔熱量比例也超過50%,屬於高油脂食物,少吃為宜。另外,營養師建議父母訓練孩子習慣喝鮮奶,而不要放任他們喝調味奶,因為根據營養分析,調味奶的成分裡奶類只佔一半,另一半幾乎全是糖水。而只要父母堅持不讓孩子喝調味奶,平時也不買回家,小孩很快就會習慣只喝鮮奶。

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Cream fluffy bread+ Flavored milk

Kcal of Cream fluffy bread high to 400, fat percent had 50%. It’s belong high fat food, don’t eat too much. Moreover, dietician advice parents trans children get used to it.

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Don’t let them drink flavored milk, cause of flavored milk just contain 50% milk, the other 50% all sugar water. And just parents insist don’t let kids drink flavored milk and never buy it, kids will suitable only drink milk.

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●健康組合:全麥麵包三明治+低脂鮮奶

  也可以選擇買全麥吐司回家,早上自己簡單加工,夾乳酪片或水煮蛋片,但儘量少抹植物奶油和果醬,以避免吃進反式脂肪及額外的糖分、色素。

Healthy contain:

Whole meal bread+ Light milk

You can also buy wheaten bread with chip of cheese or chip of egg, but reduce amount of plant butter and jelly to avoid to trans fat and extra sugar or coloring.

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【健康飲食金字塔】黃金守則

●選擇纖維質高的五穀類食物為主

(如:全麥麵包、全麥吐司、雜糧饅頭、五穀粥、燕麥片…等)

●搭配適量的蔬菜、水果

●選擇優良的蛋白質

適量的魚肉、雞肉、鮪魚或奶類製品(芝士、優格、優酪乳)、豆漿、蛋類製品

●避免選用高脂肪食物

一大早若吃的太油膩,不易消化、引起腸胃負擔

●避免選擇高熱量、高糖或高鹽分的食物組合

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[Healthy food pyramid] golden rule

●Choose high fiber grain

(ex: wheat bread, wheat toast, grain steamed bun, grain gruel, oatmeal…etc )

●collocate proper quantity vegetable and fruits

●Choose right protein

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Proper quantity of fish, chicken, tuna or dairy product(ex: cheese, yogurt), soy bean milk, egg product

●Avoid to choose high fat food

If you eat too greasy in the morning, it’s hard to digest and make you stomachache.

●Avoid choosing high kcal, high sugar or high salt food.

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要做英文報告用的,在下才疏學淺,敬請高手糾正。

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是我自己翻譯的,不是用翻譯機,也感覺自己文法不太好,因此希望幫我指出錯誤的地方怎樣翻譯比較好。

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沒有人會嗎.....

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To:大麥克

你能翻譯的話,就請寄到我的信箱:adgjl1129@yahoo.com.tw

我看到就會把最佳解答給你,後天就要交了> <,謝謝噢。

p.s.寄了之後記得在回答那隨便打些內容 我就能選你

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  • 9 年前
    最佳解答

    危險早餐?為什麼大家遇到危險,就馬上翻成Dangerous?早餐並不會讓你受傷

    ,這裡要翻成High risk meal/breakfast 表示這類早餐有危害健康的風險。不是吃了馬上死掉(那就是Poison meal),風險 Risk 指危險不一定會發生,但是要注意。

    組合(餐):combination

    本文翻譯文法不難,只是食物的翻譯名稱比較多一點,也比較罕見。樓主多多翻字典就可以翻。只需要注意一些基本文法(the+最高級)即可。

    2012-04-24 13:09:01 補充:

    可否把翻譯內容分成幾個小題目,我只有初學者五級,有解答時有字數上限2000字(奇怪?其他人都可以輸入照片、文字、網頁好幾百頁),無法幫你修改

    翻譯內容(回答內容裝不進去)

    2012-04-25 13:22:49 補充:

    補充資料都要翻嗎?可能要需要點時間才能全部翻完。

    2012-04-25 14:26:20 補充:

    Convenience storeHigh risk breakfast: Hotdog burger with Sugary drinks

    Being the processed food, the hotdog contains quite a few calorie and fat, much salt as well. Besides, kids love to add a lot of ketchup and pickles, bite in more sodium and calorie. A hotdog buger with these add-ons contain 500 units of calorie, surprisingly. If he drink a sugary beverages, such as milk-tea or red tea, the calorie content will be from 600 to 700 unit, a lot more than the need of calorie for a kid's breakfast.Healthy breakfast: Onigiri with skim milk or yogurt

    A onigiri contains 200 units of calorie. The contents of calorie and fat are rather low. It also has carbohydrate and protein. Adding up low-fat milk, the conbinations, which are suitable for kids, are welcome by most nutritionists.

    Moreover, add up light-yogurt and a tea-egg with onigiri, the protein content can help kid's brain development.(下面補充)

    2012-04-25 14:45:35 補充:

    Breakfast chain store

    High-risk breakfast: Hibachi noodle with milk tea

    This meal is greasy and salty. Kids love to add a lot of sause, which causes thirst, and that evokes more sugary beverage drinking.

    2012-04-25 14:45:47 補充:

    It is recommended that once or twice a month to eat this kind of meal, only had to. On the other hand, hamburger is not recommended for its high proportional fat, too much greasy.

    2012-04-25 14:56:30 補充:

    Healthy breakfast: Egg-sandwich

    The best choice on the chain store menu is sandwich. Egg-sandwich is much better than ham-sandwich, for the later contains a lot of salt. Reminded that ham is aslo a processed food, contains more salt and other iingredients.

    2012-04-25 15:14:47 補充:

    Pay attention to tuna sandwich, of which the tuna is greasy tuna or not, should not add mayonnaise for more favor. This kind of greasy food should be avoid.

    2012-04-25 15:14:56 補充:

    Asking the chief to reduce the amount of greasy ingredients when you order this meal. It is welcome to add a few pieces of lettuce or tomato slice.

    2012-04-25 15:22:46 補充:

    沒辦法再加字了,改寄給你

    2012-04-25 16:31:40 補充:

    邊翻邊張貼,就沒校正了,上頭有許多拼字錯誤,或語態錯誤,另外給你個修正版。

    2012-05-01 09:57:14 補充:

    因為你的問題太長,譯文無法在這裡全部列出,也因此無法讓人投票判定是否為正解。

    也可能是如此,發問者沒有權限去決定最佳解,只好交互投票。

    我也太熱情了,只想把文章翻出,也不熟悉這裡的遊戲規則。

    日後我不會幫人家寫作業了!

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  • 9 年前

    你能翻譯的話,就請寄到我的信箱:adgjl1129@yahoo.com.tw

    我看到就會把最佳解答給你,後天就要交了> <,謝謝噢。

    p.s.寄了之後記得在回答那隨便打些內容 我就能選你

    2012-04-25 20:50:35 補充:

    各位請投"002號"的大麥克唷,他幫我解決了!

    2012-05-01 20:46:26 補充:

    放心,好人有好報,我一看到奇摩寄投票平手信,而我有最後決定權,馬上就跑來選你了。

    最後我把你幫我翻譯的與我自己翻譯的交叉比對修改後,在報告上得到不錯的效果喔~真的很謝謝您,也衷心祝您生活一切順心愉快:)

  • 9 年前

    熱狗那段看起來像是翻譯機翻的

    文法多處不正確

    像是:far as calories demand of children

    far 在這裡不是這樣用的

    我會建議改: higher than the standard need of calories for a children.

    飯糰那段看起來也....

    像是 light milk 並非低脂肪牛奶

    通常都是說low-calorie 或是low-fat milk

    健康早餐那段也有瑕疵

    best choice 前面再加一個"the"

    加工食品是processed food或是processed product

    後面的就不說了....

    整體來說文法有很大的瑕疵

    因為標題上寫 "翻譯的文章對不對"

    所以抱歉囉,我沒有翻譯

    需到的話麻煩樓主再告知

    2012-05-06 00:10:51 補充:

    我實在不懂

    標題為:"哪位英文高手能看我翻譯的文章對不對"

    並非"幫忙翻譯"

    我也充分的解釋錯誤的地方

    結果樓主卻是偏袒另一位回答者

    既然當初是要翻譯為何不是直接打"翻譯"

    感覺很納悶

    我不是計較那幾點,而是我自認為充分回答想幫助樓主卻是換來樓主對於別人的偏袒

    我感覺到很傷心......

    在知識加替別人解答那麼久,這是最令我心碎的一個發問者...

    實在不懂我到底錯在哪裡.....

    花了時間幫別人回答問題,結果還換來心碎.

    何必呢?以後遇到樓主也不必幫你翻譯了,避免再次令我傷心

    參考資料: 我的大腦
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