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請英文高手幫我潤飾我寫的小文章 拜託有點急><

這是我寫的小文章 我的英文非常爛

所以想請英文好的人幫我潤飾 修改

讓句子變得通順 正確

錯誤的文法 單字也請幫我修改><

拜託各位的幫忙 謝謝 非常急

因為我的因為非常爛

所以修改時請盡量使用簡單的英文

如果需要增加句子以求通順也請幫忙><

有些地方有寫中文 是怕大家看不懂我的英文所寫的中文意思

小文章可能會錯誤連篇 真的很不好意思

真的拜託了

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Hello, everyone. My name is OO. I’ll be happy to answer your questions atthe end.I’m going to tell you my interests.My interest is taking photos and going toart museums.Because I like art and design. My major is Visual Art.When I see the beautiful things. I’ll very exciting.I like music,too. Sometimes I playing theguitar and piano.Now you know a little about my interests. Today I’d like to tell you about ”AFive-Day Dream Vacation”The aim of this presentation is to talkabout how to plan my five-day dream vacation.(這次簡報的目的是訴說如何規劃五天的假期) The first day,I’ll go to National Palace Museum in Taipaiwith my friends.There is a Louvre art exhibit. (有羅浮宮的藝術展覽)Come to the exhibition to Taiwan rarely. (這次難得來到台灣展出)I really want to see. (我非常想看)I love art, it can let me happy and fulfilledmy life. The second day,To kill time with friends, we going to themovie. Then, going to shopping and eat dinner.I will enjoy the happy times The third day,I going to see my grandmother andgrandfather with me presents.Relatives come to here.(親戚都來到這)My younger brother and sister like to playwith my cousin.Everybody is happy together. The fourth day,I’ll going to check out the books fromlibrary.Drinking the tea, watch the books andlistening to music.(喝著茶看著書聽著音樂)Have a good time in the afternoon.(有個美好的下午時光) The fifth day,I stay at home all day.Cooking some foods, watching TV.In the evening, walking in the park.Enjoy this time, reduce stress. So, this my five-day dream vacation.That’s all for this part.Thank you for listening.Now you’re welcome to ask questions.Thank you very much.

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I ‘ll going to visist my grandmother and grandfather with my parents.

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Music can touch the inner soul of me. I always deeply moved by it.

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  • 9 年前
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    Hello, everyone. My name is Yuki. I’ll be happy to answer your questions in the end.I’m going to tell you my hobbies. My hobbies are taking photos and going to art museums. Actually, I like art and design, so when I see pretty things. I'll be so excited. By the way, Visual Art is my major. And I like music too. When I am free, I like playing guitar and piano, and love to sing and write songs. Well, now you've known a little bit of my hobbies.

    Today I’d like to tell you my ”Wonderful Five-Day Journey”. The aim of this presentation is to show you how to plan the route. The first day, I’ll go to National Palace Museum in Taipei with my friends. I'd like to visit the Louvre art exhibition. I really don't wanna miss it. You know, art is my life, and this special exhibition can make me delight. The second day, we would like to relax and fritter away time, therefore, we will go to watch a film. After that, shopping and eating a dinne will be great.The third day, I going to see my grandparents with my Dad and Mom. All my relatives/family members will stay together. My younger brother and sister like to play with my cousins, so it's a good opportunity. I think it will be a happy meeting/party. The fourth day, I am planning to borrow some books from the library. In the afternoon, I'd like to have a cup of tea in a a nice place for reading those books and listening music. Hope I will have a great time. The fifth day, I will stay at home all day. Cooking some foods and watching TV will be good ideas. In the evening, I'd like to walk in the park. Enjoy my own free time and relax my mind.

    All right, this my "Wonderful Five-Day Journey". That’s all for this section.Thank you for listening. Now you’re welcome to ask me any questions.Thank you very much.

    2012-04-12 01:12:59 補充:

    Hello, everyone. My name is Yuki.

    This is my presentation and I’ll be happy to answer your questions in the end.

    Before the presentation, I would like to tell you my hobbies. My hobbies are taking photos and going to art museums........................................................

    2012-04-14 01:06:16 補充:

    ......Actually, I like art and design, so when I see pretty things. I'll be so excited. By the way, Visual Art is my major. And I like music too. When I am free, I like playing guitar and piano, and love to sing and write songs....

    2012-04-14 01:06:27 補充:

    .....Engaging music has always been a major source of joy for me when feeling up, and of solace when down. Music always connects through to my inner heart and soul and deeply moved me. Well, now you've known a little bit of my hobbies.

    2012-04-14 01:07:29 補充:

    You are so mean. Only offer 5 points!

    參考資料: Chinese Taipei = Chinese government-in-exile in Taipei. Fucking Chinese have brainwashed Formosan Japanese.
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