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請幫我翻譯化妝品英文期刊

Enhancing the beauty of one’s eyes is of significant importance to

consumers and has led to the development of very large product

categories in both cosmetics and skin care. In particular, enhancing the visibility of eyelashes has become a billion plus dollar

industry, globally, and continues to grow [1, 2]. Mascara is used to

enhance the beauty of a person’s eyes by coating the lashes to

thicken, lengthen and darken the eyelashes [3]. As a result, consumers tend to be very passionate about their mascara, often stating that it is the one cosmetic product that provides the biggest

impact on overall appearance. In fact, many women feel self-conscious being seen without their mascara.

Historically, there are generally two types of mascara: water

resistant and waterproof. Water-resistant mascara can be removed

with warm water and soap, whereas waterproof mascara is typically removed with a make-up remover product [4]. Both types are

typically applied and removed during the same day. This leaves

many time points in a consumer’s life when she is not able to

enjoy the beauty benefits of mascara. Although many consumers

wish they could have the lash beauty that mascara provides all the

time, current options are ‘long-wear’ mascaras or semi-permanent

lash stain products. But ‘long’ is a relative term, and existing longwear mascaras are designed to eliminate reapplication during the

day, but also to be easily removable by the user using soap and

water or a make-up remover product. The current technologies do

not last through showering and sleeping and are therefore not suitable for wear beyond one day. Semi-permanent lash stain products

provide colour but not the thickening benefits that consumers want

from mascara products. Furthermore, the beauty look of current

semi-permanent lash stain products tends to degrade rapidly after

the first day of wear.

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  • 9 年前
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    眼部增強美化對消費者而言極其重要,無論在化妝或護膚界,它已經演化成龐大的產品線。

    尤其是增加眼睫毛的能見度已經變成全球性上億金額的產業,並且持續成長。

    眼睫膏過去是用來美化人的眼部,在眼睫毛上抹上塗料,以使眼睫毛看起更粗更長更黑。

    結果,消費者變得對眼睫膏非常喜愛。他們常說這項化妝品最能大大改善他們的外型

    事實上,沒用眼睫膏出門的話,很多女人會覺得很不自在。

    歷史上而言,眼睫膏有兩種:抗水性和防水性。抗水性眼睫膏可以用熱水或肥皂去除。

    而防水性眼睫膏要用卸妝產品才能卸除。

    這兩種眼睫膏基本上都是要當天上妝、當天卸妝。

    這在消費者上妝後,當她覺得睫膏無法提供美妙的妝扮(必須重新上妝),

    這導致很多次的產品生命週期點。

    This leaves many time points in a consumer’s life when she is not able to

    enjoy the beauty benefits of mascara.

    儘管很多消費者希望他們能夠整天保有美美的睫毛

    最新意見是:"長效"眼睫膏和半永久性睫毛染劑。

    但是:「長久」是一種相對的名詞。

    市面上長效性眼睫膏僅是針對一天之中避免重複補上眼睫膏,

    但它們仍然很容易在使用者洗臉時被肥皂、水、或者卸妝水去除掉。

    目前的技術並不能使眼睫膏經歷洗澡、睡眠後仍能保持著。

    因此長效性睫毛膏仍無法使用超過一天。

    半永久性睫毛染劑僅能染上顏色,但無法像睫毛膏一樣,

    提供消費者需要睫毛濃密的效果。

    除此之外,半永久性睫毛染劑使用了一天以後,

    往往會很快地失去它的美容效果。

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    上面斜線部分和原文比對處,是這篇文章最難翻譯的部分,我讀了很多遍,推敲這段話的意思,在比對上下文關係,認為這樣翻比較合乎原文意旨。

    當然也歡迎大家指正。

    2012-05-01 12:03:29 補充:

    交付投票啊?

    枉費我費心翻譯這篇說...

    補充我譯文的說明:

    This leaves many time points in a consumer’s life when she is not able to enjoy the beauty benefits of mascara.

    當眼睫膏失效脫妝時,這會導致很多次上妝機會(點)。

    life指化妝品的生命週期,從塗抹到逐漸脫妝這一過程

    眼睫膏的生命週期很短。

    參考資料: 自己
  • 9 年前

    提高人眼的美是重要性的的從而帶來巨大消費者並產生了很大的產品的開發在化妝品和皮膚護理的類別。加強睫毛的可見性,特別是已成為億元,加上美元工業、 全球範圍內,而且不斷增長 [1,2]。睫毛膏用來提高一個人的眼睛的美塗料,睫毛加厚加長、 變暗睫毛 [3]。因此,消費者往往是非常熱愛他們的睫毛膏,通常指示它已提供了最大的一個化妝品產品對整體外觀的影響。事實上,許多婦女感到自覺不用他們睫毛膏被看到。歷史上,通常有兩種類型的睫毛膏: 水耐藥和防水。可以刪除防水睫毛膏與溫暖的水和肥皂,而通常刪除防水睫毛膏化妝卸妝產品 [4]。這兩種類型是通常應用,並在同一天的過程中被刪除。這將使她不能當消費者的生活中很多時間點享受美容效益的睫毛膏。雖然許多消費者希望他們可以有睫毛膏提供了所有的衝擊美時間、 當前選項是 '長磨損' mascaras 或蒐衝擊著色的產品。但是 '長' 是一個相對的名詞,與現有的 longwear mascaras 為了消除過程中的重新應用一天,但也要很容易可移動使用者使用 soap 和水或化妝卸妝產品。當前的技術做不是最後通過淋浴和睡覺,因此不適合穿一天后。半永久性的鞭子著色產品提供色彩但不是增厚效益消費者想要的從睫毛膏產品。此外,美看的電流半永久性的鞭子著色產品往往會迅速後降級磨損焦慮的一天。

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