CharisC 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

英文作文文法修正!!!

請各位大大幫忙看這兩篇作文有哪裡的文法須要修正???謝謝!!!

1.多多募款發票 幫助他們 2.在買東西的時候 省下一點錢 然後把那些錢捐給他們 3.把不要的衣服 捐給他們穿 4.把他們經歷的事情 藉由網路傳出去 讓更多人來一起幫助他們

A lot of fundraising invoice to help them Province some money to buy things when And then donate the money they Donate unwanted clothes they wear

To spread out the things they experienced by the network .

Allow more people to help them .雖然身為學生能幫的忙有限不過只要有心一樣可以做得很好

例如在超商買完東西時可以順手捐發票或將一些零錢給捐助出去

又或者在路上看到需要幫忙的人就伸出援手

所以只要有心幫助別人一點都不難Although busy as a student help, but if we really want to they can do it well.

For example, in the supermarket buying something you can easily donate an invoice or some change to the donor out Or on the road to see the people who need help to lend a helping hand .

So if we really want to help others that are not difficult.

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  • 8 年前
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    A lot of fundraising invoice to help them- Collect and donate a lot of shopping receipts to help them- Do a lot of raffle ticket fundraising to help them Province some money to buy things when And then donate themoney they - Spend little when you shop and donate the money saved from shopping to them. Donate unwanted clothes they wear- Donate secondhand wearable clothes to them

    To spread out the things they experienced by the network. Allow more people tohelp them- Tell their story on the net (internet) so that a lot of people would be able to know their story and help them. Although busy as a student help, but if we really want tothey can do it well.- Although students can offer limited help due to busy schedule, we still can help them if we really want to. For example, in the supermarket buying something you caneasily donate an invoice or some change to the donor out - For example, you can donate your shopping receipt after buying things from supermarket or you can simply donate coins and put it into the collection box. Or on the road to see the people who need help to lend ahelping hand- Or we can lend a hand to help people who need help on the road. So if we really want to help others that are not difficult- so if we really want to help others there is no difficulty

  • 8 年前

    1. Collect a lot of fundraising invoice to help them

    2. Save some money when you buy things and then donate the money to them.

    3. Donate unwanted clothes to them.

    4. To spread out the things they experienced by the network, call up

    more people to help.

    Although as busy as a student you are, if you really want to help that you can still do it as well.

    For example, during shopping in the supermarket you can easily donate an invoice or some change to the donor box. Or on the road when you see the people who need help that you will lend a helping hand .

    So it is not difficult if we really want to help others.

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