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The next day, I woke up early because of the loudnoises. I felt really strange, because I heard people cried. I knocked one of myneighbor’s door and tried to know what was going on over here. I got reallyshocked by the answer, because they said Myrtle and Tom, they both dead. Their bodywas lying on the street in this morning. I took a deep breath and the nextmoment, I saw Gatsby, he walked towards me with a hopeless face and I suddenly rememberedthe conversation I had with Daisy.Gatsby and I were having the breakfast togetherin the restaurant near by the apartment. We ate in silence. When we almostfinished our dish, Gatsby looked at me and said his heart could not feelanything since last night. I was going to say something to comfort him, but weboth saw Wilson came towards our table.

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  • 9 年前
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    The next day, I woke up early because of the loudly noise. I felt really strange, because I heard people crying. I knocked one of my neighbor’s door and tried to know what was going on over there. I got really shocked by the answer, because they are Myrtle and Tom, who both dead. Their bodies are lying on the street in this morning. I took a deep breath and the next moment, I saw Gatsby walking towards me with a hopeless face and I suddenly remembered the conversation I had with Daisy.I was having the breakfast in the restaurant near by the apartment. We ate in silence. The moment we almost finished our dish, Gatsby looked at me and said his heart could not feel anything since last night. I was going to say something to comfort him, but we both saw Wilson came towards our table.

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    9 年前

    The next day, I woke up early because loudnoises. I think it is very strange, because I heard people crying. I knocked down the door one of the myneighbor tried to know what happened here. I reallyshocked answer, because they say Patel and Tom, they are dead. This morning they bodywas lying in the streets. I took a deep breath and nextmoment, I saw Gatsby, he came up to me the face of despair, I suddenly rememberedthe to talk with Daisy.

    Gatsby and I have breakfast togetherin apartment near the restaurant. We eat silence. The when, we almostfinished to our food, Gatsby looked at me and said his heart since last night feelanything. I was going to say something to comfort him, but weboth see Wilson came to our table.

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