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這是中文:

我寒假跟朋友去高雄,我們去了很多景點也有去逛街。我們去玩了三天,開學前就回來,拍了很多照片,印象最深刻的是去海邊玩水,跟朋友再一起不管去哪裡都覺得好玩

這是翻英文:

My winter vacation with a friend to Kaohsiung, we went to a lot of attractions to go shopping.Let's go for three days before school starts back, took many pictures, most impressed with is to go to the beach play in the water together with friends no matterwhere having fun

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    原文係逐字照譯的中式英文,不合文法,在儘量不改動你原用單字的前提下,不用花俏的文法修飾,擬改如下:

    I went to Kaohsiungwith my friends for winter vacation. We went shopping and visited many touristattractions there. We stayed in Kaohsiung for three days and went back homebefore new semester. We took a lot of pictures there, and playing on the beachwas the most impressed part of the trip. It was fun to be with friends nomatter where to visit.

    2012-05-04 09:20:40 補充:

    touristattractions 應該是 tourist attractions

    2012-05-04 09:35:45 補充:

    homebefore 是 home before

    2012-05-04 09:36:44 補充:

    Kaohsiung with 奇怪了 怎麼連在一起了SORRY

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  • 8 年前

    我不知道標不標準

    但我住美國也三年了

    來修看看好了 :)

    I went to Kaoshung(我覺得這樣音比較接近 = =) with my friend during the winter vacation. We went to several unique attractions and shops there. We stayed in Kaoshung for three days, and came back before the school starts. I took a lot of pictures, the most impressing thing was the trip to the beach. I think it is always fun to be with friends not matter when and where.

    注意喲! 注音符號後面一定要有一個空格!

    希望這些可以幫助你 :)

    參考資料: 自己,沒錯,就是我
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  • 8 年前

    樓上回答依小弟淺見仍有些許地方需要改正

    I went to Kaohsiungwith my friends in the winter vacation. We have been to many touris tattractions, and went shopping as well. We had stayed in Kaohsiung for three days, then went back (home)可以省略 before new semester. We took a lot of pictures there. Besides , playing on the beach was the most impressive part of the trip. It is fun to be any place with friends.

    參考資料: 自己
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  • 8 年前

    基本上發問者根本沒有用心自己翻,是直接拿Google的翻譯結果貼上,

    這樣的問答方式還是無法幫助發問者學習英文。

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  • 8 年前

    對於uncle sean的回答甘拜下風,自行移除!

    也謝謝讓我學習到一些英文文法的多樣化!

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