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Cacti are strange-looking plants which have many different uses, ranging from medicine to food.

Traditionally, they were used to treat inflammation by Chinese; Native Americans regarded them as a common vegetable. Recently, researchers discovered more of their practical uses, especially Nopal cactus. It contains a wide range of nutrients including vitamins C,E,A, and more. It is said to be the treatment for lowering blood sugar and is rich in antioxidants.

Edible cacti can be used to make candy, perfume, and marmalade. Though they look a bit weird, these plants really provide a lot for human.

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  • 8 年前
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    Cacti are strange-looking plants which have many different uses, ranging from being medicine to food.

    Traditionally, they were used to treat inflammation by Chinese; Native Americans regarded them as a common vegetable. Recently, researchers discovered more of their practical uses, especially Nopal cactus. It contains a wide range of nutrients including vitamins C,E,A, and more. In addition, it is said that cactus is a to be the treatment for lowering blood sugar and is rich in antioxidants.

    Edible cacti can be used to make candy, perfume, and marmalade. Though they look a bit weird, these plants really provide contribute a lot for to humans (or human being). 1.文章寫得很好,幾乎找不出問題。2. ranging from being medicine to food 建議加being字,如不加being, “從藥品到食物”,那cacti的角色究為何﹖是成為藥品及食物本身,或只是它們所含之添加物?加上being字文意會比較清楚,不加似也沒多大問題,就看撰文人如何表達自己的文字。3.It is said 是"據說”的慣用語,此 it 應是指被傳說的這整件事,而不是指特定物品。 It is said that cactus is ………. 使用it is said that+子句的方式表達,感覺文意較完整,比較容易讓讀者了解。it is said to be………似用it代表 cactus, 而在使用”據說……….”這說法時,通常不是如此用法,建議改成 it is said that+完整子句來陳述。

    4.provide a lot for humans, provide a lot何物,似未說清楚,我改為contribute a lot to ,意思是它可被用來做成很多東西,並有很多功能,對人類貢獻很多。

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  • 8 年前

    仙人掌是奇怪的前瞻性的植物,其中有許多不同的用途,範圍從醫藥到食品。

    傳統上,他們被用來治療炎症由中國印第安人視為一種常見的蔬菜。最近,研究人員發現了更多的實際用途,特別是仙人掌仙人掌。它含有多種營養素,包括維生素C,E,A,更多。據說是降低血糖的治療,並含有豐富的抗氧化劑。

    食用仙人掌可以被用來製造糖果,香水,和果醬。雖然他們看起來有點不可思議,這些植物真的為人類提供了很多。

    應該是這意思吧!!!

    沒有大礙只是為何會有仙人掌仙人掌呢??

    修一下就好第三行

    參考資料: 我自己
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