湯圓 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

請求英文作文指教,謝謝

請問各位英文專家或老師,我的英文作文有沒有文法上的錯誤,或是任何不正確的地方?感謝各位大大!

Summer vacation

  All school have a vacation in summer and spring. The summer vacation is longer than spring vacation , so many student may to plan some thing in summer. For example , someone can go hiking and swimming. For me, summer vacation is too long, so I want planning a travel during holiday. I plan trip to Taipei in three week. In these week, I want eating Taiwan food , and visiting old street, because I like tradition culture. In addition, I want going to Taipei public library, because I enjoy visiting the large library in city, I can enjoy reading and the time I stay in silence. Above all is my plan in summer vacation. Everybody also can plan a vacation plan to belong to yourself.

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    8 年前
    最佳解答

     There are two vacations for schools every year which is in summer and winter.The summer vacation is longer than the winter vacation, so many students may plan to do something in summer. For example, some will go hiking and swimming. For me, summer vacation is too long, so I want to plan on having a trip during the holiday. I plan to travel to Taipei for three weeks. In these weeks, I want to eat Taiwanese food, and visit the old streets, because I like traditional culture. In addition, I want to go to Taipei public library, because I enjoy visiting the large library in city.In this way, I can enjoy reading and the time staying in silence. Above all are my plans for summer vacation. Everybody can also make a plan for the vacation that belongs to yourself.

    希望有幫到你哦!!!:))

    有什麼問題的話再問吧!

    2012-08-01 12:49:42 補充:

    There are two vacations for schools every year which "are" in summer and winter.

    剛剛不小心打錯了,抱歉!!

    參考資料: 高三的我
  • 8 年前

    Summer Vacation

    Summer vacation is longer than any other school break, therefor it is wise and important for every student to make plans for Summer vacation. Some students may go hiking or swimming. Because it is such a long break, I would like to plan a three weeks tour trip to Taipei City. In these three weeks, I want to eat as much Taiwanese food as possible and visit Taiwanese historical sights in Northern Taiwan because I like Taiwanese traditions and culture. In addition, I want to go to Taipei Public library because I enjoy visiting large libraries in big cities. In big libraries I can enjoy reading and the quiet time when I'm maditating alone. These are my plans for this Summer vacation. Everyone can plan an unique and meaningful vacation for oneself to enjoy.

    2012-08-02 13:54:13 補充:

    Sorry,,,, maditation needs to be corrected to "meditation"

    2012-08-02 13:55:53 補充:

    I mean "meditating"

  • 8 年前

    There are two vacations for all schools which are spring vacation and summer vacation. The summer vacation is longer than the spring vacation , so many students may plan to do something special in summer. For example , someone may choose to go hiking or swimming.For me, summer vacation is so long that I want planning a travel during it. I have planned a trip to Taipei for three weeks. In these weeks, I want eating Taiwanese sneak, and visiting old street, because I like the traditional culture. In addition, I want going to a Taipei public library, because I enjoy visiting large libraries in a city. I enjoy reading and the time I stay in silence. Above all is my plan for my summer vacation. Everybody can also make a plan for the vacation which is belong to yourself.

    我修改過文法的錯誤,並且讓它順暢一點,你可以參考看看

    P.S.我把Taiwanese sneak 比較符合台灣小吃

    2012-08-01 14:35:58 補充:

    最後一句打錯

    Everybody can also make a plan for the vacation which belongs to yourself.才對

    參考資料: 自己是補習班助教
  • 8 年前

    寒假一般用winter vacation

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