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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

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Jenny was prepared for Final Exam last night, her neighbor Mr. Lin was holding party, so Jenny called police officer to give warning. Soon after, next door is quiet more, and Jenny can concentrate on preparing for Final Exam.

Jenny 昨晚在準備期末考時,鄰居Mr。Lin正在舉行派對,所以 Jenny 叫了警察過來給他們警告。不就之後,隔壁就安靜許多了,Jenny 也可以專心準備期末考了

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    Jenny was preparing(1) for the Final Exam last night while(2) her neighbor, Mr. Lin was holding a(3) party. Therefore,(4) Jenny called the (5) police(6) to give him a (7) warning. After a while(8) , the neighbor next door become quieter (9) , and Jenny could(10) concentrate on prepating for the Final Exam.

    (1)be+ving過去進行式

    (2)正當/然而,此句兩者皆通,加上while 較順

    (3)加冠詞

    (4)"所以"移到句首較好

    (5)the police代表警方

    (6)所以我去掉officer

    (7)給他,give後面接受詞

    (8)一陣子後

    (9)這樣較好

    (10)別忘了是過去式

    參考資料: me
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  • 8 年前

    By adding something and deleting something to make your essay more fluently flowing:-

    -------Jenny was preparing for the final last night while her neighbor Mr.Lin was holding a party. Due to its noisiness, Jenny called the police to warn them. Soon afterwards, the neighbor became quieter and Jenny could () concentrate on preparing her Final.

    -------the errors and corrections:-Final=Final Exam, neighbor=neighbour next door, noisiness=added, after that= afterwards,

    her final= preparing the Final concentrated by herself..

    參考資料: google
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  • 8 年前

    When Jenny was prepaing for her final exam last night, her neighbor, Mr. Lin, was holding a party. Jenny called the police to give him a warning, and the next door became quiter then. So, Jenny could concentrate on her preparation of the final exam.

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  • 8 年前

    Jenny was preparing for the Final Exam last night while her neighbor Mr.Lin was

    holding a party. Due to its noisiness, Jenny called the police to warn them. Soon

    after that, the neighbor next door became quiet and Jenny could finally concentrate

    on preparing the Final.

    我加了一些新的句子,這樣文義比較通順,也改了一些地方。希望你會喜歡^^

    參考資料: me
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  • 匿名使用者
    8 年前

    was prepared =此人(被動)被準備

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