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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

可不可以幫我改正這篇英文~感激不盡@@@@

畢業後,本人在一間網路科技公司任職,在此份工作上經常使用相關文書軟體以及英文,這使我在這份工作上不斷的精進自身的專長。同時,我一直期許自己能夠在每個工作的細節上都做到最完美,期望本身的積極態度能有此機會為公司服務。

After graduated, I was working for an Internet company. I use English and document processing software while working there. This work helps me improve my skill which I learned in the school. I also expect I can do my best on the details of work. I sincerely hope that I can get this job offer. Thank you.

請大大幫我改正

感謝了!!

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  • Lv 6
    8 年前
    最佳解答

    畢業後,本人在一間網路科技公司任職,在此份工作上經常使用相關文書軟體以及英文,這使我在這份工作上不斷的精進自身的專長。同時,我一直期許自己能夠在每個工作的細節上都做到最完美,期望本身的積極態度能有此機會為公司服務。

    I was working for an Internet company after graduated from school. Both in English and document processing software, to be working there. This work improve my skill which I learned in the school. It's my expect that I can do my best on the details of work, and sincerely hope that I can get this job offer. Thank you.

    (原文"I"似乎重覆多次,精簡此部分,僅供參考)

  • James
    Lv 5
    8 年前

    畢業後,本人在一間網路科技公司任職,在此份工作上經常使用相關文書軟體以及英文,這使我在這份工作上不斷的精進自身的專長。同時,我一直期許自己能夠在每個工作的細節上都做到最完美,期望本身的積極態度能有此機會為公司服務。

    After [graduation], I [worked] for an Internet company. I [used] English and document processing software while working there. This work [helped] me improve my [skills] which I [had learned] in [school]. I [have always tried my best to do a perfect job on any assignment right down to the last detail]. I sincerely hope that I can get this job offer. Thank you.

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