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全民英檢初級寫作修改

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Sam tree

I have lived in a house around a big tree. The residents of around here have called to this tree was Sam tree.Why the tree called Sam?In the past time,there had been a boy,his name was Sam.He was a afraid boy in elementary school,but he liked plantlets and flowers.One day,his classmate,Tony,a bad student in teachers eye,he had put some bean in Sam’s book bag. Then Sam was so angry about someone to do it,but one thing he thought about─plunged these bean in his father’s garden .Ten years ago, Sam’s family had one big tree in the back yard where were everyone could see it.Due to this tree was planted by Sam,so everybody around here has called ‘Sam’ to this big tree.

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  • 8 年前
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    錯誤太多,避免用big words,時態要注意()

    Sam tree

    I have lived in a house around a big tree for many years.

    The residents of around here have called to this the tree was call it Sam tree.

    Why the tree is called Sam?

    10 years ago,In the past time ,there had been a boy,his named was Sam.He was a afraid shy student boy in elementary school.

    but He liked plantlets plants very much and flowers .

    One day,his classmate,Tony,a bad student in teachers eye, he had put some beans in Sam’s bookbag. Then Sam was so angry about someone to do it, but one thing he thought about an idea struck him . . He could plunged these plant the beans in his father’s garden .

    Ten years ago , Now Sam’s family had one has a big tree in the back yard where were , and everyone could can see it.Due to this Because the tree was planted by Sam, we name it after Sam.so everybody around here has called ‘Sam’ to this big tree. names it after Sam.

    2012-08-27 21:56:32 補充:

    粉紅色是刪除

    底線是新增的

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    6 年前

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  • 8 年前

    有些廢話太多 然後從你的句子結構 第二句就看得出是中式英文

    然後注意文法上的使用

    像是there is / there are / there has been / there used to be

    還有注意你自己單字上的使用

    不要刻意說 因為不知道意思 所以去co電子辭典/yahoo/google之類的

    盡可能換意思寫

    有時辭典給你的東西 有點算"過度"

    初級寫作 思考不必這麼複雜

    中級寫作 只是換角度去寫 但也不至於過度深奧

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  • 8 年前

    Sam tree

    I live in a house around a big tree. / I have lived in a house around a big tree for a long time.

    The residents around here call this tree Sam tree.

    Why is the tree called Sam?

    In the past, there had been a boy (who was) named Sam.

    He was a afraid boy in elementary school, but he liked plantlets and flowers.

    One day, his classmate, Tony, a bad student in teachers' eyes, put some bean in Sam’s book bag.

    Then, Sam was so angry about someone who did it, but he thought about one thing ─ plunged these bean in his father’s garden.

    Ten years ago, Sam’s family had one big tree in the back yard where everyone could see it.

    Due to this tree (which was) planted by Sam, everybody around here since then call this big tree "Sam".

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