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水夜 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

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My name is Yuan Fong,Hou.I was born in Taichung in 1987.My hometown is Taichung and living in now. My family consists of five members.My dad has

retired.My mom is housewife.I have two young brother.One study in gratuate school and the other go onto 3rd of college.I graduated from electronics department in Taichung Industrial High School and got the degree of electronic engineering department from National Formosa University Department in the period of four years.I have been preparing the examination of government after completed my military service.


Alough i have not any experience of work,but i have a strong will and basic knowledge.I have prepared to face any challenge in the future and defeat it.

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Hope you will allow me an opportunity for this position in the near future.I will take a diligent and conscientious attitude to toward the work and i believe you will not be disappointed.


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  • Homer
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    8 年前

    My name is Yuan Fong,Hou. I’ve been living in Taichung since I was born in 1987. My family consistsof five members.My dad retired and mom is a housewife.I have two young brothers:one studies at gratuate schooland the other is junior of college. I was graduated from the electronicsdepartment of Taichung Industrial High School and had the Bachelor degree of electronic engineering at National Formosa University.I have been preparing for the official examination of governmentafter I have my militaryservice completed.(若你應徵私人公司 , 準備公務員考試要說嗎?)· 2012-09-15 16:42:17 補充I have confidence to meet any challenge to make up for the lack of actual working experience.· 2012-09-15 16:42:40 補充Hope you will allow me to have an opportunity forthis position in the near future.I will take a diligent and conscientiousattitude toward the work and I believe you will not bedisappointed.

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