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tweety141416 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

幫忙檢查一段英文(極需~~

Teacher’s Day is right around the corner!

For this year, teacher tought us patiently,

we learn the way to be with people.

Teacher just likes our parents, takes care of us.

Although sometimes we are not conscientious and make you be angry,

our thanks to teacher still very strong!

Thank you for teaching verymuch, and hope you

Happy Teacher’s Day

教師節的感謝詞

幫忙檢查一下

如果用詞不當 或是 用法錯誤 或是 句子前後不流暢

煩請糾正喔~~

感恩~~~

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    Teacher’s Day is right around the corner!

    For In this year, teacher had tought us patiently, we learn the way to be with people patiently, Teacherand you are just likes our parents, to takes care of us.

    Although sometimes we are were not conscientious and made you be angry, our thanks to appreciations for teacher are still very strong!

    Thank you very much for your teaching verymuch, and hope wish you

    happy Teacher’s Day 註:1. In this year 在此一年裡,已道出已過的特定的一段時間,應使用過去完成式。2. 第四行之like是介詞,非動詞,不可加s,且前應有be動詞。3. Parents 複數型,指雙親,parent 單數型,則指雙親之一,文中之老師似僅指1人,parent應使用單數型。4. Strong 是形容詞,其前應有be動詞。5. Make you angry, angry前不必加be, 如我們常說的,Something makes me more beautiful.

    2012-09-24 16:18:40 補充:

    倒數第二行,後面之very much請刪除。

    2012-09-24 16:20:32 補充:

    Teacher’s Day is right around the corner!

    之right請改為just

    Teacher’s Day is just around the corner!

    2012-09-24 16:34:28 補充:

    right around the corner 也是正確的,可不必改。

    2012-09-24 23:41:16 補充:

    請將our parent之our刪除。

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  • Lv 6
    8 年前

    Teacher’s Day is right now around the corner!

    For this year, you tought us patiently, we learn the way to get along with people.

    You just likes our parents, takes care of us.

    Though we are not conscientious and make you be angry sometimes,

    but we still love you, and strongly thanks to you, my dearest teacher !

    Thank you very much for teaching us, and wish you

    A happy Teacher’s Day !

    僅供參考~~

    2012-09-21 09:58:06 補充:

    For this year, you taught us patiently...(更正 sorry)

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  • hannah
    Lv 6
    8 年前

    Teachers' Day is right around the corner.

    This year you taught us patiently the way to be with people.

    You are just like our parents, taking care of us.

    Although sometimes we are not conscientious and make you angry ,

    we are extremely grateful to you!

    Thank you very much for your teaching , and wish you a Happy Teachers' Day.

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  • 8 年前

    Moral values are not to be taught by teachers.

    They need to be installed by your parents before your release to the wild wild school.

    Some very good teachers are bad persons, if not evil.

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  • 8 年前

    用意見欄跟你說囉

    有些小錯誤:)

    learn需加to

    sometimes移到we之後

    our改為we

    verymuch改為very much

    大概就醬了=)

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