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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

英文高手幫忙小弟看看! 急急急!!!!

這是篇簡單短文,但是難倒我了,我真的盡力了.請大大幫我看看這樣翻對不對,怕出糗...

或哪邊需要改的,或有錯誤的地方^^

中文:我的理想工作是當飛行員,,因為開飛機很酷.雖然我現在學的是修飛機,但是從小常夢想能在天空飛行.我的英文是罩門,,應該好好加強,,是現在最要努力的目標.大家將來都希望有好的成就,我也是如此.所以我要朝者理想努力,一步一步邁進,相信能夠成功,,感謝各位!

英文:My ideal job is to be a pilot, to fly an airplane is cool.Although I now learn is to repair the aircraft, childhood often dream of flying in the sky.My English is the Achilles Heel, should take to strengthen, is now the most goal.We will want to have a good achievement, and so am I.So I'm going towards the ideal efforts, step-by-step forward, I believe that to be successful. thank you!

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  • 8 年前
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    建議修改如下: My ideal job is to be a pilot, to fly an airplane is cool.

    ***My ideal job is to be a pilot, to control an airplane flying is so cool

    and great for me. Although I now learn is to repair the aircraft, childhood often dream of flying in the sky.

    ***Although my major at present is Repairing Aircraft, yet since during my childhood, I have been dreamed of flying in the sky. My English is the Achilles Heel, should take to strengthen, is now the most goal.

    ***I learned I need to strengthen my poor English as my main target

    right now. We will want to have a good achievement, and so am I.

    *** All of us would like to gain a good achievement, and so I do. So I'm going towards the ideal efforts, step-by-step forward, I believe that to be successful. Thank you!

    ***In this case, I" ll do my best to catch my goal step by step, I believe I will achieve it very soon. Thank you very much! ( Bow.....鞠躬)

    2012-10-19 02:44:53 補充:

    修改如下,sorry!

    yet since my childhood, I already have a dream of flying in the sky..

    參考資料: 文字機械人 ^_^
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  • 呆子
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    8 年前

    My goal is to be a pilot who can fly an airplane.

    even though I learn how to repair the aircraft right now, , I often dreamed of flying in the skyWhile I was a child. Because my English is not good enough, I should strengthen my language ability. To have a good achievement is our target, so I'm working hard towards the destination step-by-step. I believe that I can fulfill my hope in the future. Thank you!

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  • 8 年前

    來吧, 推薦你背英文單字的好方法.

    用單字卡背單字是很好的方法, 所以有些書的最後有單字卡. 智慧型手機也有單字王單字卡的app,可以去蒐尋載來試看看,有些很實用的.

    我推薦"wow英文單字王" 或 "奇蹟英文單字卡"這兩個app, 很實用,很有效率,可以從英文背,再複習從中文背,這樣才會熟,還可以把背過的字放到蒐集夾,再點出來背.

    全集有8000字喔,夠你背的. 裡面也有說明背單字的訣竅,看一看,還蠻不錯的.

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  • 8 年前

    I of ideal work is Dang pilots,, because opened aircraft is cool. while I now learn of is repair aircraft, but small often dream can in sky flight. I of English is cover door,, should good strengthening,, is now most to efforts of target. Members future are hope has good of achievements, I is so. so I to towards who ideal efforts, a step a step towards, believe to successfully,, thanks you!

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  • 8 年前

    My ideal job is to be a pilot, to fly an airplane is cool.

    -->My ideal job is to be a pilot, because fly an airplane is cool.

    Although I now learn is to repair the aircraft, childhood often dream of flying in the sky.

    -->Even though my major now is repairing aircraft, but in my childhood, I always dreamed of flying in the sky.

    My English is the Achilles Heel, should take to strengthen, is now the most goal.

    -->The goal I want to achieve desperately is to improve my English.

    We will want to have a good achievement, and so am I.

    -->Everyone wants to be successful, I am not an exception.

    So I'm going towards the ideal efforts, step-by-step forward, I believe that to be successful. thank you!

    -->Therefore i will move forward to my goal step by step, I believe i will achieve it very soon, thanks for your attention.

    文法上有一點小不通 我的句子給你參考看看吧

    參考資料: me
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