Shin 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

急 ! 有關 concern 1句子

A lot of public concern about poisons in milk powder.

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    A lot of public concern about poisons in milk powder. (X)

    這個句子的主要錯誤是沒有動詞.

    訂正:

    A lot of public concerns lie in toxin contained in powdered milk.

    A lot of public concerns are about toxin found in milk powder.

    註:

    1) 用poisons(毒藥)太嚴重了, 有立即致命危險; 吃了含三聚氰胺的奶粉不會立即致命, 只算是毒素(toxin).

    2) 奶粉: powdered milk 或 milk powder皆可.

    2012-10-29 17:59:40 補充:

    回版主:

    concern的用法, 主詞是人時, 才是用被動;

    主詞如為事物, 要用主動, 例如:

    Listen carefully. The matter I'm going to say concerns you a lot.

    參考資料: 羅莉 - 英文文法
  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    the public is concerned about toxin in powder milk.----A lot of public較少用

  • lot 很多

    milk 牛奶 

    powder 粉末

    2012-10-29 10:09:16 補充:

    toxin 毒素

    concerns 關注

    How 如何

  • 7 年前

    How about:

    There are lots of concerns about toxin in powder milk.

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