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饅頭 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

幫忙檢查文法有沒有錯誤(英文)

我要表演英文短劇(5分鐘)

以下是我負責的文章(我自己想ㄉ)

我英文很爛,只能用googl翻譯之後自己慢慢改

所以一定有文法上的錯誤,或者有更好的詞語可以替代

我希望不要太難,不然我會念不出來~~

下面是我要表演的文章(表演時我會拉二胡~~邊講解)

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首先,感謝大家的聆聽。我的名字叫XXX。我手上拿著樂器,他的名字叫做二胡,是這首歌的主旋律,因為叫做二胡,所以上面有兩條弦,按弦可以產生音階,還有這是一把弓,上面的毛是馬尾製作而成,弓和弦搭配才可以拉出聲音,看這裡。二胡上面有一張蟒蛇皮,聲音透過它才可以傳得更遙遠,我現在開始示範拉音階。do re mi fa so la ti do。謝謝。

First of all, thanks for your listening. My name is XXX. I have a musical instrument in my hands. its name is Erhu. And it’s the main theme of this song.

It has two strings because its name is erhu. Press it can produce musical scale.

And,this is a Bow. Its gross is made of horsetail. look at. This is a python skin on the erhu. It can the sound to reach farther. I start demonstration to Playing musical scale.~~~ do re mi fa so la ti do~~~ Think you.

還有,對國樂有興趣的人 我們期望你的加入

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我需要講1分鐘的內容,不知道上面的句子可不可以講到1分鐘~~如果無法~請幫我加一些句子吧!!感謝~~ :)

已更新項目:

To:○拒絕ˉ戀愛

可以幫我改一下嗎?

應該說:我手上拿著的樂器它叫做二胡

感謝 :))

2 個已更新項目:

或者改成: 這個樂器叫做二胡~~

2 個解答

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    已修正如下,請參考。

    First of all, I like to thanks you for your listening. Then let me introduce myself, my name is XXX, and now I have a musical instrument in my hands. its name is Erhu, And it’swill play the main theme of this song.

    It The instrument has two strings because its Chinese name is “erhu”, for the sound of

    “er” is similar to Chinese word “two”. When you press it the strings can will produce musical scales.

    And In addition, this is a bow. Its own “string” is made of the hair of horsetail, and look at. here, This There is are two pieces of python skins on that cover each side of the sound drum which is at the bottom of the erhu. Through the skins, It can the sounds to can reach farther. Now I start try to demonstrate to Playing how to create the musical scales of this instrument.~~~ do re mi fa so la ti do~~~ Think you.

    2012-10-30 19:25:01 補充:

    還有,對國樂有興趣的人 我們期望你的加入

    By the way, We anticipate that anyone who is interested in playing Chinese music to join us, thank you vary much again.

    另,請修正原文之最後1字,thank you 之thank 打錯。

    2012-10-31 06:39:00 補充:

    對不起,我打錯1字,thank you very much, 之very, 誤打為 vary,請修正。

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  • I have a musical instrument in my hands.的表達方式很奇怪

    我有一個樂器在我手中?????

    ..................................................

    還有最後一句是Thank you吧?Think you.好奇怪

    參考資料: 自己找到的
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