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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

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After seeing the movie.

I have thought for a long time.

Who is the best choice for my role model?

And I must to say.

This is a very recommendable movie.

Direcor make every leding role models 's individulity very clear.

Every leading role model have the point let me feel admire.

If I have to pick up one of them.

I think that will be Madge.

Why is Madge?

It is because even if Madge has a uncomprehending daughter,a son-in-law who likes to dig at her,grandsons pressed her to stay.

It totally can not stop her pursuing the marriage which had lost many times.

Even need go to India!

Strive to pursue what I want.

This is just I really want to do!

I always hesitate on the things I want to do.

So,I miss so manny good things.

But!Madge!She go when she say she want to go.

She didn't decided where she want to go when she take on the taxi.

Just smile and say she has no idea!

I hope I can have the courage as Madge.

So I think she is my best role model.

By the way!

I am really like the classic lines in the movie.

"Everythig will be alright in the end.

If that is not alright and that is not in the end."

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The reason I select her is she has a (uncomprehending??) daughter who is always teased by her son-in-law and her grandsons ask her to stay. (這段不太瞭解你的意思)

↗ 這段是說

我選擇Madge當我的模範人物是因為她不管女兒的不解

女婿的挖苦

孫子得挽留

都不能阻擋他去追尋雖然已經失敗多次的婚姻

thanks for Renny :)

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    After watching the movie, I have questioned for a long time, who is the best person for being my ideal model?

    This movie is recommended because the director made each individual character clear and they influence me a lot.

    However, Madge is the character who I choose to be my ideal model.

    The reason I select her is she has a (uncomprehending??) daughter who is always teased by her son-in-law and her grandsons ask her to stay. (這段不太瞭解你的意思)

    Nevertheless, it still do not stop Madge to go to india and marry with the person she likes even though she has lost many times. Moreover, she struggles to achieve her target which is just the model I look forward to be.

    sometimes, I hesitate to do something then makes me loss many chances. Unlike me, Madge takes action if she wants to. She just jumps on the taxi without any idea and place. I hope I am as brave as Madge.

    Least but not last, "everything will be alright in the end, if that is not alright and is not in the end" is the impressive sentence I like with the classic line in this movie.

    All in all, she is my best ideal character I choose.

    有些句子我不太瞭解 如果附上中文 可以翻得更好 :)

    參考資料: 自己 僅供參考!
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  • 寫文章要連續寫一段再分段。

    你這樣一句半句當一行,是在寫詩啦。

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