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POPCORN 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

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Whenever a year last month everyone's feelings are very much looking forward to welcome the New Year. First, we will find my friends together to go to see the fireworks. There will be singers performing on stage is approaching in a few hours ago of the New Year. Everybody is very happy to be able to join with friends in this event. Even if this day will be very cold we all get together to celebrate welcoming the New Year. This day night will be particularly lively like a small carnival. Finally, to the moment before welcoming the New Year. Everybody loud countdown time. Meanwhile, Time to midnight 0:00 many fireworks began Bloom. Then over the bloom sky of fireworks around continued several minutes. Finally, we say good night to each other on the home. This world would be better to have new hope at the beginning of the New Year expectations.

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  • 呆子
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    8 年前
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    At the end of every year, everyone is looking forward to welcoming the New Year.First, all my friends will gather to see the fireworks and the singers performing on stage for the incoming hour of the New Year. Also, everybody is glad to attend this magnificent event. Even though it will be very cold while we celebrate the New Year, at night it seems to be like a small carnival. Second, to welcome the moment of the New Year, Everyone crys out loud and counts down the time. Meanwhile, at the moment of midnight 0:00 many fireworks begin blooming, then fireworks blooming above in the sky is continuing several minutes. Finally, we say good night to each other and go home. This world would be better with the new hope at the beginning of the New Yea

    2012-12-07 10:57:04 補充:

    ----hope at the beginning of the New Yea請修正為---hope at the beginning of the New Year.---

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