幫忙！！句子中文翻成英文！！！１０點

Question

可以幫我把這句翻成英文嗎　謝謝

［想要作夢的話就要先閉上眼睛　

　

　閉上眼睛的話別人如何看我是不重要的］

Answer 1

最佳解答

版大您好，也容Panda try try ㄅ;

想要作夢的話就要先閉上眼睛

Close your eyes to dream,

閉上眼睛的話別人如何看我是不重要的

and be oblivious to how others see you.

*oblivious = 沒去注意，忽略，不以為意

說明:

*這兩句是有聯貫性的，所以用逗點隔開即可。

*翻譯時最重要的就是不要太wordy(囉唆），字越少越好，也不要逐字翻譯不然會顯死板，畢竟中西語言有差。

* 上段我用your(你/妳的)，所以下段就以you來接而非中文的＂我"，不然頗怪。

千萬要記得字多不一定好，精簡到意最重要。

Hope it helps!

2012-12-23 19:53:37 補充：

陪小Panda泡完澡之後，我又想到如果第一段是A對B說的，而第二段是B說的話，可以這樣翻：

想要作夢的話就要先閉上眼睛

Close your eyes to dream.

閉上眼睛的話別人如何看我是不重要的

By closing my eyes, how others see/perceive me is no longer important.

因為這兩句是分開的，所以用句點隔開。

2012-12-27 22:27:16 補充：

To 羅莉:

妳說的我有考慮過，但一般人不會叫自己閉眼睛...

Just sounds peculiar is all...

2012-12-27 22:58:26 補充：

Nice translation by Mr.妙手

參考資料： DP翻譯社

Answer 2

Dreams may carry on when your eyes closed, but with an open mind to continue beyond those critical judgments.

Answer 3

Close your eyes, make a wish.

What do you care what other people think?

Answer 4

兩句是同一人的連貫話語

怎麼沒人用第一人稱說這兩句呢?

I close my eyes before I dream, and while my eyes are closed, it doesn't

matter how people judge me.

Answer 5

Wanted to dream is close my eyes　　　Close your eyes how others look at me is not important

Answer 6

to dream, you need to close your eyes first. for it doesn't matter how people see you when your eyes are closed.

想要學美語的人一定不能錯過這段影片

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QceB9NQam1c

Answer 7

Doomsday Panda

Good [+ 1 ]

Answer 8

應該是:

The wish has a dream how does the speech have to close the eye

to close the eye first to bid goodbye the human to look I am unimportant.

以上純屬建議!~

如有誤,請告知

Answer 9

Close your eyes, if you want to have a dream.

And others' sights will be minor with your eyes closed.

參考資料： 我