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  Hello everyone, I am XXX, nineteen years old. I live in Banciao, Near Nanya Night Market, There are a lot of things in the night market! Which is my favorite is “Milk Bottle” Popcorn. I grow in a warm family, There are four members in my family, Father, mother, elder sister and me. My father is a... 顯示更多   Hello everyone, I am XXX, nineteen years old. I live in Banciao, Near Nanya Night Market, There are a lot of things in the night market! Which is my favorite is “Milk Bottle” Popcorn. I grow in a warm family, There are four members in my family, Father, mother, elder sister and me. My father is a plumbing and electrical engineer, he is work so hard. My mother is a barber, She is a gracious mother. My elder sister is boarders in Chungli, she is smart but lazy. I have a parrot at home, It is very cute and obedient, Whenever we are having our fruit, It always shout: “Hello 你好.”

  Chocolate is my favorite food. when I felt bored, I play sudoku. My hobby is listening to music and reading the novel. listening to music makes me relax. I immerse myself in novels, it makes me forget about everything unhappy. I am good at computer mechanical drawing. I want to learn how to playing the piano.

  I graduated from Drafting Department of Hai-san Industrial Vocational high school. I am studying in Chihlee Institute of Technology, major in Commerce Technology and Management. I like this school because everyone is friendly. I wish I could become a Sales Engineer in the future. Thanks for listening.
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