若慈 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

演講稿An unforgettable experience

英文演講要An unforgettable experience

誰可以幫我想=ˇ=

越快越好喔!!!!!

我英文程度還OK!

只是沒寫過英文的作文~

幫忙想一下ㄅ:)))

不要有人講過的喔~

因為我怕會跟別人講重複的~

字的或100上下

我演講大概3分鐘:)))

已更新項目:

有沒有簡單一點的阿~~

而且字數也不要太多!!

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    演講稿An unforgettable experience

    The most unforgettable experience I had during my childhood was raising 24 ducks all by myself.

    When I was 7 years old, I visited my grandparents who lived in the countryside and stayed with them for the whole summer vacation. One day, my grandfather gave me 24 ducklings and asked me to raise them all by myself. I asked my grandfather, “Where is the food for the ducklings?” He said,” Well, you have to find the food by yourself. I will not give you any help. Besides, you need to bring the ducklings to the pond to swim everyday.” I was confused and scared for a while. But very soon, I found the solution! First of all, I went to the backyard to plucked some vegetables and cut them into small pieces. I then fed the ducklings with the vegetables. Secondarily, when I brought the ducklings to the pond to swim, I dug out some earthworms and cut them into pieces. These earthworms also became the food for my ducklings.

    When my summer vacation ended, I went back to the city to live with my parents. A few months later, when I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents again, I found the 24 ducklings had grown up and become big ducks! I was very happy. So were my grandparents.

    I am a teenager now. Whenever I recall this unforgettable experience, I feel so grateful to my grandfather. Yes, by asking me to raise the 24 ducklings all by myself, what my grandfather intended to do was to train me to be independent and persistent. And I am sure he has achieved his purpose.

    版大:

    1.這完全是我自己想、自己寫的,所以保證一定不會和別人講的重複。

    2. 如果版大已經是大學生了,不是青少年,那麼請將最後一段開頭的 a teenager改為an adult.

    3.我寫完之後,自己讀過一次,並用計時器量時間,差不多是三分鐘。若您堅持要100字上下,那恐怕就講不到三分鐘了。時間和字數之間,您自己要做個取捨和平衡。這樣我們才能夠幫您。

    4.若您還是覺得英文太難,想要我提供中文翻譯或解釋,請告訴我一聲。我也可以附上中譯。

    5.如果有那位路過的前輩,覺得後學寫的演講稿可以再精簡些,還請不吝指教。因為剛剛我量了時間,差不多剛好三分鐘。若能再減少些字,或把某些字換成更符合版主要求的「簡單」原則,我想應該對版主來說都是有所助益的。謝謝!

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  • 8 年前

    in the beach? so they all buried under the sand?

    the grammar is .....misleading

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  • 8 年前

    英文演講應該要自己想才會有感覺

    況且你不怕有人跟你一樣上網找嗎?

    如果怕會錯的話可以找老師批改

    以上發言如果有冒犯的地方 我在這說道歉

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  • 匿名使用者
    8 年前

    Topic: An unforgettable experience Everyone has unforgettable experience, I too experienced this. I remember that there was I was swimming at a beach, I wore Speedo. I know that when girls see a guy wearing Speedo, they often think it is cute or sexy. However, I wasn’t mean to find a date at a beach while swimming, I was just to swim. It was Sunday, and there were so many people in the beach. I could see lots of women coming to the beach wearing bikini, all sort of that stuffs that make you fantasize what you want to do with them. Anyway, that day was very windy, and I was doing too hard on swimming. I wasn’t aware that my Speedo went off when I tried to get back to the shore. All I saw was there were many girls laughing so hard at me,and saying “aw, what is that cute thing?” I felt very shy when they said that, and quickly wore back my Speedo. After that, those hot girls came to me and ask me how long I had learn to be a good swimmer. I, at the time, was too shy to look at them, and one of them put her arm around me and told me just don’t be shy, be brave like a mature man. I was so happy and gave her a kiss, then all the girls jumped on me, pressurizing me on the floor that I could not move. Man, that was SWEET.

    2013-01-28 18:30:45 補充:

    板主你好

    我已經盡量用最簡單的單字跟文法了!

    這已是小學的程度!

    不然你就多讀幾遍應該就可理解!

    參考資料: 正在教大學生的我
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