This is the first time I read the English novel, although my heart was full of fear before I challenged it. And at first I read it difficulty, but all getting better after I read the whole book. Because I able to almost understand the contents and keynotes of the story.
My favorite character in this book is the little boy. Because I think that he has a fascinating charm, his dialogues are the children say child language all the time, I was attracted by his innocence, and when he heard his grandmother said the witches stories, showing the cowardice which he has make me feel that he is so cute, too! This is why I think he is my favorite character in this novel first.
Next, the little boy exuded another charm that is mature. When he turned into a rat, he did not give up in his life, there were always more cheerful and optimistic attitudes to look at this accident. He even though felt that it was very good when he turned into a rat by the witch. Because he became very carefree and relaxed. I was drawn by his positive thinking.
I can not believe in such a small role can bring me these feelings. Because this novel makes me touch deeply. That is when we encountered adversity in our life, do not use negative attitude to give up. Instead, we have to use a positive attitude to solve everything, and at this moment you will find that the things seem to be easier! So, remember this faith and practice it at every moment in the future!
- 8 年前最佳解答
his dialogues are the children say child language all the time.
he heard his grandmother said the witches stories
2013-02-17 14:30:30 補充：
This is my first time to read English novel, so I think it is a challenge for me. I was full of fear before I have started to read it. At first, I think it was difficult for me to read English novel; however it did not last long. Gradually, I was getting better and better. In no time, I was almost able to understand the contents and keynotes of the story.
In this book, my favorite character is the little boy. I thought that he has a fascinating charm with his childlike personality, and I was attracted by it. In addition, when he listened to the witches stories that his grandmother said, he showed his cowardice which made me feel that he was so cute. It is the reason why I think he is my favorite character in this novel.
Next, besides, the little boy exuded a mature personality. When he was turned into a rat, he did not give up and depress. He always kept his mind on optimistic attitudes to face the accident; moreover, because he became very carefree and relaxed, he even thought that it was a very good thing for him when he was turned into a rat by the witch. I was drawn to him by his positive thought.
The novel is touching my heart deeply. Originally, I can hardly imagine that such a small role can bring me these feelings. When we encountered adversity in our life, we should not give up easily with a negative attitude. Instead, we have to create and use a positive attitude to solve everything difficult. At this moment, you will find that the things seem to be easier than you think before. So, we have to keep the faith in mind and practice it at every moment in the future!
2013-02-17 14:37:40 補充：
2013-02-17 14:39:45 補充：
2013-02-18 03:33:48 補充：
第一段的「At first, I think」，改成「At first, I thought」接後面過去式的句子，才不會有時態上的問題，再麻煩你改一下~^^
第二段他外婆說故事給他的那句，「that his grandmother said」，改成「that his grandmother told to.」應該比較好..說故事的說是用tell..@@
第四段：Originally, I can..整句裡面兩個can.. 改成「I could」..
希望現在跟你說還來得及改....@@參考資料： me, me, me
- 8 年前