唐帥哥 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

誰可以幫我增加一些字!!因為演講時間是2分到2分半.但

幫我多加一些字進去!!因為時間是2分到兩分半~可是我念完只有1分55秒左右...

請各位大大多幫忙一夏!我下個禮拜五就要比賽了!!

Is money all-powerful? Money is playing an important role in our life. It seems that we can do nothing without money. It!s no surprise that there!s a proverb saying “Money can make the world go around.”In another word, money is more powerful than anything else. But is money all powerful? It is true that money is very powerful and important in our daily life and most of the material things or services we need have to be bought with money. Without money, we cannot do almost anything or go anywhere we want. But money is not all-powerful. There are many things which money cannot buy, such as time. Sometimes when we are very happy, we wish that the period of happiness would last longer. But no matter what we do, or how much money we are willing to pay, we cannot make a day last longer than twenty-four hours. On the other hand, when we are unhappy, money cannot make the unhappy time pass away more quickly,and nor can it bring us a day without sadness and worries. We may be rich, but our money can't bring back our lost time. As the saying goes, “Time past cannot be called back.”Here we can say very clearly that money can buy anything, but not time. So money, after all, is not all-powerful.

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  • 念泰
    Lv 6
    7 年前
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    Is money all-powerful?This is a great question.We should take seriously about it.Indeed, money is playing an important role in our lives. It seems that we can do nothing without money.It's no surprise that there's a proverb saying “Money can make the world go around.”In another word, money is more powerful than anything else. But is money all powerful all the times ? It is true that money is very powerful and important in our daily lives and most of the material things or services we need have to be bought with money. Without money, we cannot do almost anything or go anywhere we want. But money is not all-powerful. There are so many things which money cannot buy, such as time and affection .Take time for example, Sometimes when we are very happy, we wish that the period of happiness we cherish would last longer. But no matter what we do, or how much money we are willing to pay,in the end nothing is left ,only sweet memories linger in our minds, we cannot make a day last longer than twenty-four hours. On the other hand, when we are unhappy, money cannot make the tough time pass away more quickly,and nor can it bring us a day without sadness and worries. We may be rich, but our money can't bring back our lost time. As the saying goes, “Time past cannot be called back.Is money all powerful? The answer is no .”Here we can say very clearly and loudly that money can buy anything, but not time. So money, after all, is not all-powerful.

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  • 7 年前

    可是我就算念很慢最多也只能2分5秒而已..

    你可以幫我找停頓點嗎?或是幫我加幾句話進去?

    謝謝你的意見.請幫我一夏...拜託!!

  • T
    Lv 6
    7 年前

    我覺得已經夠長了˙

    你可以嘗試念慢一點˙或是多找幾個停頓點來強調語氣跟句子的重要性

    或是每遇上逗號句號˙就停頓一秒˙才再開始念

    這樣也可以控制速度

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