你的回答: I have a lot of words want to tell you,
(可以修改成: I have a lot to tell you)
我的回答: I have so much to chat to you about.
我的回答: I want you to tell me all the things about you.
你的回答: a lot of things want to do with you
(可以修改成: There are still a lot of things I want to do with you)
我的回答: There are still tons of things I want to do with you.
我的回答: What I love the most is your smile.
你的回答: but when I look at you
(可以修改成: But when I chat with you)
我的回答: But whenever we chat
你的回答: I was so bashful
(句子的時態要一致 所以可能這裡你要說 I always feel so bashful)
我的回答: I always feel very nervous.
你的回答: Let me didn't treasure time
(可以修改成: I could not cherish the time we spent together)
我的回答: I ended up not being able to have a great time with you.
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