英文翻譯如何翻：我有很多話想要告訴你

Question

1.我還有很多話想告訴你

2.想聽你說所有關於你的事,

3.還有很多事想和你一起做

4.你的笑容是我最喜歡的,

5.但是當我們說話的時候,

6.我總是感到很緊張,

7.所以讓我沒有好好珍惜在一起的時光！

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1. I have a lot of words want to tell you,

2.

3. a lot of things want to do with you

4.

5.but when I look at you

6. I was so bashful

7. Let me didn't treasure time

想請專家們幫我：

(1)看看我自己翻的的行不行得通,

(2)額外能另外翻個另我參考

謝謝:)

Answer 1

最佳解答

1.我還有很多話想告訴你

你的回答: I have a lot of words want to tell you,

(可以修改成: I have a lot to tell you)

我的回答: I have so much to chat to you about.

2.想聽你說所有關於你的事,

我的回答: I want you to tell me all the things about you.

3.還有很多事想和你一起做

你的回答: a lot of things want to do with you

(可以修改成: There are still a lot of things I want to do with you)

我的回答: There are still tons of things I want to do with you.

4.你的笑容是我最喜歡的,

我的回答: What I love the most is your smile.

5.但是當我們說話的時候,

你的回答: but when I look at you

(可以修改成: But when I chat with you)

我的回答: But whenever we chat

6.我總是感到很緊張,

你的回答: I was so bashful

(句子的時態要一致 所以可能這裡你要說 I always feel so bashful)

我的回答: I always feel very nervous.

7.所以讓我沒有好好珍惜在一起的時光！

你的回答: Let me didn't treasure time

(可以修改成: I could not cherish the time we spent together)

我的回答: I ended up not being able to have a great time with you.

參考資料： 9 year experience from overseas study & work

Answer 2

原文:

我還有很多話想告訴你，想聽你說所有關於你的事,還有很多事想和你一起做。你的笑容是我最喜歡的,但是當我們說話的時候,我總是感到很緊張,所以讓我沒有好好珍惜在一起的時光！

其實英文很多的說法並不需要一個字一個字翻譯出來。參考這個答案:

I got a lot to tell you. I want to know more about you and also do a lot with you. I like your smile the most, but I always feel so nervous when I talk to you. That's why I didn't cherish the time we shared together.

2013-03-16 00:30:35 補充：

我想聽你說所有關於你的事...這句或許也可以這樣說: I want to hear you talking about everything related to you.

參考資料： 我自己

Answer 3

想請專家們幫我：

(1)看看我自己翻的的行不行得通,

==> 行不通，因為英文的文法觀念還不清楚

(2)額外能另外翻個(句子)另(/讓)我參考

1. "I have(V1) a lot of words want(V2) to tell you"

一個句子不會出現兩個動詞，應改為

I hope to speak lots of words to you.

這裡雖然出現兩個動詞(hope and speak)

但是 speak 已改為不定詞，因此在句中不是動詞

主要動詞是 hope

2. 想聽你說所有關於你的事

==> And I want to hear anything about you from your mouth.

3.還有很多事想和你一起做

==> I still hope to accomplish other works with you.

4.你的笑容是我最喜歡的,

==> Your smile is my favorite reward.

"最喜歡的"是形容詞用法，後面要接名詞

另一種句型可以用 "be interested in"

採用被動句型：

I was most interested in your smile.

5,6 ：第5句含意不完整，可以和第6句結合成一句

==> I always felt nervous when I looked at you.

考慮時間，這應該是已經發生過的事情，所以用過去式

7. 所以讓我沒有好好珍惜在一起的時光！

==> So I had wasted my time lived with you.

你/妳的中文與英文程度都需要再充實。程度好的人才會吸引別人想來認識你/妳。

Answer 4

1. I still have many things to tell you

2. want to hear you say that all the things concerning you,

3. There are a lot of things and do it with you

4. your smile is my favorite,

5. but when we speak of time,

6. I always felt nervous,

7. so let me not cherish the moments!