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My father is a inconsiderate man. He wakes up at 5:30 a.m. everyday, but he let his alert rings at 5:00 a.m. every morning. The alert rings loudly and keeps in long time. It let other family member have to wake up at that time, even we don’t have to.

My father usually drives me to bus station, but he never wait for me. We always get out at 5:50, but he will let me walk to bus station if I still brushing at that time. He never waits me even 5 minutes.

He is the first one gets home and takes shower. My father never cleans the floor in bathroom. He let shampoo spreads everywhere and might let someone to fall down. He is a totally inconsiderate family member.

My favorite restaurant is The Cat, a cute restaurant in Taoyuan. The restaurant has pink decoration, red and white ribbon on door, color flower on wall and pinky stickers on floor. After get in, there is classic music and bell rings to welcome their customers. The Cat has many cats in restaurant, customers can play with them and wait for their meal. The Cat sells muffin, pasta, coffee and cakes. My favorite is muffin. The muffin here can order with fruit, honey or cookies. It taste a little sweet and smell very good. All restaurant around the aroma of milk, coffee and muffin. The muffin here is crispy and crumbly. That’s my favorite place.

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  • 7 年前
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    My father is AN inconsiderate man. He wakes up at 5:30 a.m. everyday, but he

    LETS his ALARM RING at 5:00 a.m. every morning. The ALARM rings loudly and keeps RINGING FOR A long time. IT MAKES OTHER PEOPLE wake up at that

    time, even WHEN we don’t have to.

    My father usually drives me to THE bus station, but he never WAITS for me. We

    always get out at 5:50, but he will MAKE me walk to THE bus station if I AM still

    brushing MY TEETH at that time. He never waits FOR me; NOT even FOR 5

    minutes.

    He is the first one TO GET home and take A shower. My father never cleans the

    floor OF THE bathroom. He LETS THE shampoo spread everywhere, and THAT

    might CAUSE someone to fall down. He is a totally inconsiderate family member.

    My favorite restaurant is The Cat, a cute restaurant in Taoyuan. The restaurant

    has pink decoration, red and white ribbon on THE door, COLORFUL FLOWERS

    on THE WALLS and pink stickers on THE FLOOR. INSIDE THE RESTAURANT,

    there is CLASSICAL MUSIC PLAYING and THE bell rings to welcome their

    customers. THERE ARE many cats in THE restaurant. Customers can play with

    them WHILE THEY wait for their meal. The Cat sells MUFFINS, pasta, coffee and

    cakes. My favorite is THE muffin. The muffin here can COME with fruit, honey or cookies. It TASTES a little sweet and SMELLS very good. ALL AROUND THE

    RESTAURANT, THERE IS the aroma of milk, coffee and MUFFINS. The

    muffin here is crispy and crumbly. That’s my favorite place.

    改了文法還有一些不太順的地方。最後 muffin 的地方因為你一直用單數,所以我把它留著,但是有些地方因為和其他多數的東西一起列著所以我改成複數。我的意見是最好是全部用複數。

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