匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

英文文章句型翻譯問題

Dear Mommy: In my heart your wisdom just like Edison smart, also you are a big cookto me, because you always cooking something delicious food when I was hungry.In the same time you are a master in the fix things,if anything broken you just wave your hands like magic can fix anything, makeme admire you very much.When I was sick and sad, youalways took care of me and cheer me up make mefeel much better.

請問文章句型 是否還有需要修改的地方???

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  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    because you always cooking something delicious food when I was hungry.

    改成You always provide the best quality of food.

    In the same time you are a master in the fix things,if anything broken you just wave your hands like magic can fix anything, makeme admire you very much.

    改成In the meantime, you are good at fixing things. You could fix anything that

    is broken. I'm thankful of that actually.

    When I was sick and sad, youalways took care of me and cheer me up make me

    feel much better.

    改成Also, every time when I am sick, you take care of me. Literally you cheer me up and make me feel better.

  • Louis
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    可惜你沒有一句是正確的。建議你查字典,每句從動詞查起,仿照例句結構,只換其中部分的字。長話要短說,以免成了run-on sentence。

    In my opinion, you are as smart as Edison. You are also a wonderful cook.

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