粉咩 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

急~請"英文高手"幫我看我的英文哪裡需要修改~謝謝>..<

不好意思我英文很差

請"英文強的高手"幫我檢查,因為是學校報告要用,請認真修改!感恩~

這一篇是我文章的三四段,一二段也順便唷~謝謝

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他們怎麼是警察和醫生呢?其實都是多虧了狗狗靈敏的嗅覺!警犬及救難犬就是很好的例子!在地震時,就是這群英勇的小狗靠著嗅覺把壓在房子底下的傷患救了出來。他們也藉由人類的汗水以及指紋,幫助警察緝捕犯人,甚至是找炸彈!除此之外,更有研究顯示,狗狗嗅覺可以察覺到人類身上的疾病,像是癌症。應該有聽說過狗狗治療師吧!憂鬱症的人可以改善其情緒,甚至是瀕臨死亡的人,能帶給他們勇氣面對死亡。寵物的純真能撫平人類受傷的心靈!所以他們是不是很棒的警察及醫生呢!

How they are polices and doctors? Actually thanks to its sensitive smell. Police dogs and rescue dogs are good examples. These courageous dogs rely on smell to rescue victims when the earthquake. They also rely on human sweat and fingerprint help polices to arrest criminal. Even to find bombs. In addition, according to the research, dogs’ smell can aware of the disease to humans. For example, cancer is. Have you heard of the dog therapist? Hypochondria’s temper can be improved. People who are near death can give them courage to confront death. Pets’ pure spirit can heal human soul. So, what a great police and doctor they are.

寵物若認定了一個人,其一生只會對那個人表現忠誠,他們是開心果,帶給你無窮的歡樂。他們也是心靈支柱,陪你走過痛苦的歲月,治療你的傷痛。更是人類的大幫手!所以對我們這些飼主來說,他們不僅是寵物,是孩子、是家人、是朋友,而你又怎麼忍心捨棄他們呢?

If dog recognizes a person, it will only loyal to that one. They are clown, bring you infinite pleasure. They are also the pillar of our soul, accompany you through years of pain, treatment for your hurt. And they are big helper of humans. For us, owners, pets are not only pets. They are child, friends, even the members of the family. So, how could you forsake them?

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  • 8 年前
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    They were the police and the doctor? Fact thanks to dog sensitive sense of smell! Police dogs and rescue dogs is a very good example! During an earthquake, this is the group that heroic dog smell wounded out under pressure in the House. They also depend on human sweat and fingerprints to help police tracking down the prisoners, or even find the bomb! In addition, more research shows that dog smell can detect disease in humans, such as cancer. Should have heard of the Doggie therapist! Depressed people can improve their mood, even dying people, to give them the courage to face death. Innocence of pets can heal the human broken hearts! So if they're great cops and doctors too!

    If pet finds a man following their only loyalty to the man, they are happy, to bring you endless joy. They are also spiritual pillar, accompany you through years of pain, treatment for your pain. Is the helper of mankind! So for us, the owners, and they are not only pets, being kids, family, friends, and so how do you want to discard them?

  • 8 年前

    Error and corrections for "fan-mare"on para1,2:-

    When the earthquake (occures).

    (to)help police(-)----even to

    Correction for para3,4:-

    only(be)loyal

    bring(ing) you

    accompann(ing) you

    are child(ren)

    could you forsake them (once cherished)?

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