可否請英文高手grammar check 一下.謝謝!

Question

We're the professional medical health team of CHANGHUA CHRISTIAN

HOSPITAL have been promoting health examination with OCAC for years and

launched a series of comprehensive health examination program for overseas Chinese.

Answer 1

最佳解答

We [are] the professional medical health team of CHANGHUA CHRISTIAN

HOSPITAL.

[We] have been promoting health examination with OCAC for years and

launched a series of comprehensive health examination [programs] for [the Chinese overseas].

2013-05-20 02:21:28 補充：

另一種寫法，看來想不想分開兩句，以下是沒分開的：

We [are] the professional medical health team of CHANGHUA CHRISTIAN

HOSPITAL, [who] have been promoting health examination with OCAC for years and

launched a series of comprehensive health examination [programs] for [the Chinese overseas].

2013-05-20 02:21:49 補充：

*你

2013-05-20 02:23:32 補充：

打錯，應是 who [has] been 而非 who have been

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