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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

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I've written a paragraph about a graph from my textbook

now I've completed most of it

but dunno how to write a concluding sentence

here's my paragraph:

The level of someone’s education corresponds to their amounts of income and tax brackets. This graph demonstrates that the level of someone’s education corresponds to their income levels and tax brackets. Those who have the highest education levels have the highest income levels and pay the greatest amounts of taxes. Their pre-tax incomes range from $50,500 to as high as $95,000. Those who have the second-highest education levels have the second-highest income levels and pay fewer taxes. Their pre-tax incomes range from $37,000 to as much as $49,000. Those who have the lowest education levels have the lowest income levels and pay the least taxes. Their pre-tax incomes range from $21,600 to as high as $35,700.

>>> How should I write a concluding sentence?

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  • 7 年前
    最佳解答

    Thus, the tax system can be regarded as a fair one, as people earning more have to pay tax proportionally higher, which promotes the redistribution of property among different levels of the society.

    所以,這個税制可說是公平的,因為有較高收入的人需繳交相應的更高的税,這樣能促進財產在不同社會階層間再分配。

    我一般會寫它的 impact 和 significance,總之要帶出 insight,一種新觀點。

    Hope it helps!

    2013-05-25 16:18:07 補充:

    Thus, receiving higher education means more responsibilities of contributing to the society by means like paying taxes, as seen in the graph, which is reasonable since the highly-educated gain most from the society.

    另一個 conclusion

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