The advantage of using smart phone
Early phase, people use cell phone which has call and send message, but nowadays, smart phone has different function likeness little computer. Such as, line internet, play games, Global positioning system, send E-mail, watch television and application. Application offer to different software and we can download to smart phone.
Smart phone has funny functions, when we feel boring, we can use application download games to smart phone that is very friendly. Just like, angry bird that application of create the billion of times downloaded.
Smart phone has Global positioning system and map which has help to driver and if we have to lose anything way, we will use it. Smart phone can send and receive email, if we would like alter email content, smart phone will do it.
And, we can use application download talk software to smart phone, for example, line, what app, and we chat. It is not only sending message but also use more and more picture.
Finally, smart phone bring handy life and we receive quick information, therefore, nowadays smart phone is important to most smart phone user, because it is assimilated into their life.
- 8 年前最佳解答
In the past, people only used cell phones for calling and sending messages, but
nowadays, smart phones have far more functions than old cell phones, it has
almost turned into a mini computer. The smart phones today have functions such as the internet, games, Global Positioning System, email, television, and other
applications. There are also different applications for different software for people
Smart phones have interesting functions that previous phones do not have.
People can use game applications on their phones when they are bored. ( not sure about the friendly part). For example, Angry Bird is one of the many game
applications that helps people kill time.
(add transition from last paragraph to this paragraph) Smart phone also has GPS
and map that help people find their ways when they get lost. (transition)
People can check their emails with their smart phones, including sending,
receiving, and editing their emails.
Smart phones also has applications that allow people to communicate. Examples
of these applications include LINE, What App, and We Chat. These applications
not only allow people to send messages, but also allow us to send pictures.
Finally, smart phones bring more convenience to daily life because it allow
people to look up information more quickly. Therefore, smart phones are becoming
more popular and more important because it has already become part of people's
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