I'll deliver to her when I rec

Question

I'll deliver to her when I received. 這句話通嗎?

有人要寄東西給我代轉給某女士 我如此回答 文法時態有無問題?

Answer 1

I'll deliver it to her when I receive it.
動詞要有受詞，而且副詞子句的動詞不能用過去式，因為還未收到，動詞要用現在簡單式。

2013-07-12 17:47:11 補充：
本句的副詞子句也可以用現在完成式：when I have received it

2013-07-13 10:01:33 補充：
I'll deliver it to her on receiving it.
保持同方向，不宜由主動接被動。

2013-07-13 11:46:07 補充：
I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.較合適,代名詞放在其代表的名詞後面才清楚.

2013-07-13 12:58:28 補充：
不可
只有to deliver something to somebody
或to deliver something to something: Would you like to have the latest fashions delivered to your door?
或to deliver somebody from something = to free someone from an upleasant situation

2013-07-13 13:17:37 補充：
to deliver +間接受詞+直接受詞
美國口語=為(候選人)拉票,為(某種運動)呼籲(支持)
Let's deliver him all our support.
= Let's deliver all our support to him.
所以在當授予動詞用時,deliver的意思不是把(東西)遞送給(某人)
see遠東新世紀英漢辭典p.368deliver A5解釋

Answer 2

003是可以的.但I'll deliver it to her when it arrives比較好.

Answer 3

不可以。

在這句中，“deliever”是及物動詞； 所以要說Deliver "it" to her才對。

Answer 4

可改為 I'll deliver to her when it is received. 這樣可以嗎?

2013-07-13 01:41:23 補充：
那改為 I'll deliver it to her when it is received. 這樣可以嗎?

2013-07-13 10:20:45 補充：
謝謝各位指教! 再請教

I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.

還是 I'll deliver it to her on receiving the book.

哪一個較正確?

2013-07-13 12:50:18 補充：
謝謝! 再請教

I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.

改為

I'll deliver her the book on receiving it.

合適嗎?

Answer 5

有人要寄東西給我代轉給某女士
1) Will follow your instruction upon which is receipted ;
2) Will re-forward on your behalf upon receipt ;

Answer 6

present perfect consists of part of the verb have with the past participle of the main verb,receive, used to express actions completed by the present , a particular point in the future.:-I have received;
Hence I'll deliver to her when I have received.