Mouse 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

初級英檢作文

請幫我改改下面英文錯誤的地方 ..

請告訴我應該怎樣寫會比較順暢 ..

滿分五分這樣寫大概可以拿幾分?

請告訴我寫的文章中文法的錯誤!!

感恩

Frank slept very late at yesterday.

Because Frank got up late, he missed the bus.

Frank not only reproved by the boss, but also lost his black wallet.

Frank was so unlucky that anything did not well.

How poor was Frank!

Yesterday was not Frank day.

He decided to hard-working at next time.

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  • 7 年前
    最佳解答

    Frank went to bed very late yesterday.

    Because Frank got up late, he missed the bus.

    Frank was not only reproved by his boss, but also lost his black wallet.

    Frank was so unlucky that anything did not go well.

    How poor Frank was!

    Yesterday was not Frank's day.

    He decided to be hard-working next time.

    2013-08-10 21:12:45 補充:

    錯在------

    被動用法be+V-ed,

    動詞片語:go well,

    Be動詞+形容詞: be hard-working

    大約2.5分, I guess

    2013-08-10 21:17:36 補充:

    also--------

    yesterday 前不加介系詞,

    and--------

    所有格用法:Yesterday was not Frank's day.

    可能2分左右, I guess

  • 7 年前

    樓上的大哥

    讓我來回答你

    雖然你的中文讓我看得不是很懂= =

    1.在第一到第三段我就說了

    法蘭克在昨天遇到了一些衰事

    2.法蘭克決定下次要認真努力一點

    才不會又在工作的時候出包

    2013-08-13 11:26:52 補充:

    矮又~

    見仁見智嘛= =+

    又何必計較那些文字咧

    每個人的觀點都不一樣啊大大

    2013-08-13 20:11:04 補充:

    我可沒說啊= =

    我只說見仁見智= =+

    又何必計較那些文字咧

  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

    英文盡量不要斷斷續續, 太多句點.

    可以順暢的一句話講完最好

    Frank went to bed late last night and he missed the bus the next morning because he slept in and couldn't wake up. He was not only scolded by his boss, he also lost his black wallet on that day. Nothing was going well for poor Frank and it was an unlucky day for him. It was not his day at all. He then decided, from now on, he will be even more hardworking.

    大概三分半 意思都可以懂就好了

  • 7 年前

    英語文法應該不是主要問題吧

    主要問題是混亂的邏輯思路

    1. 位神今天挨罵掉包 但是惡日是昨天?

    2. 位神要努力工作與這事有關?

    2013-08-13 09:46:45 補充:

    1.法蘭克在昨天遇到了一些衰事

    根據妳寫的 法蘭克在昨天只有晚睡 (went to bed very late yesterday)衰事都是今天早上發生的

    2.法蘭克才不會又在工作的時候出包

    根據妳寫的 法蘭克是運氣不好 而不是不努力做工

    2013-08-13 11:57:34 補充:

    >> 每個人的觀點都不一樣啊大大

    那你的觀點是甚麼? 算我多管閒事

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