英文文章修改問題
Book : Alice in Wonderland
The book is full of fantasies . if it comes true, it will be very interesting!
I think the writer who writes the book is very excellent!
Nowadays , everyone is busy in their things without any rests , they should let their steps slower. To enjoy the fancy time(dream world).
Thinking impossible things is not that easy , but it is the power that makes the world keeps advancing.
So we should keep thinking impossible thing , not just be a same old bitter persons.
It will be helpful for yourself and the big ole world.
The story also teaches us everyone is different from one another , you couldn't what they is thinking about. So just be yourself , everyone is the best!
About the kindness , I believe everybody should have a kindness heart originally , but it probably destroyed by the cruel world or yourself.
What a cruel world it is! If we can treat others with our kindness heart , the world will be changed , won't be this... cruel and brutal.
我自己打的，可能很多文法錯誤><" 能請大大們幫忙修一下嗎，謝謝您們了!
這是讀書心得，有４００字，但發現一次無法貼完，所以...
這只是一小部分而已，如有興趣***，並到我的發問，去找後面沒法貼到這篇的文章，謝謝您們! (it is called part 1)
fancy time(dream world)
Which is better?
big ole world. 文法錯? 還是...?
3 個解答
- 妤德Lv 68 年前最佳解答
Book : Alice in Wonderland
The book is full of fantasies .It it comes true in real life,
I bet it will be very interesting!
I think the writer who wrote the book is excellent !
Nowadays , everyone is busy in their work without any rests ,
they should take their steps slower.
To enjoy the fancy time(dream world).
Thinking impossible things is not that easy ,
but it is the power that makes the world keeps advancing.
So we should keep thinking impossible things ,
and not just be a same old bitter person.
It will be helpful for yourself and the big whole world.
The story also teaches us everyone is different from one another ,
you couldn't know what other people is thinking about.
So just be yourself , everyone is the special !
About kindness , I believe everybody should have a kind heart originally ,
but it is probably destroyed by the cruel world or yourself.
What a cruel world it is! If we can treat others with our kindness heart ,
the world will be changed , it won't be this... cruel and brutal.
2013-08-18 12:27:53 補充：
Big whole world=整個世界
參考資料： myself - 匿名使用者8 年前
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