英文文章修改問題

Book : Alice in Wonderland

The book is full of fantasies . if it comes true, it will be very interesting!

I think the writer who writes the book is very excellent!

Nowadays , everyone is busy in their things without any rests , they should let their steps slower. To enjoy the fancy time(dream world).

Thinking impossible things is not that easy , but it is the power that makes the world keeps advancing.

So we should keep thinking impossible thing , not just be a same old bitter persons.

It will be helpful for yourself and the big ole world.

The story also teaches us everyone is different from one another , you couldn't what they is thinking about. So just be yourself , everyone is the best!

About the kindness , I believe everybody should have a kindness heart originally , but it probably destroyed by the cruel world or yourself.

What a cruel world it is! If we can treat others with our kindness heart , the world will be changed , won't be this... cruel and brutal.

我自己打的,可能很多文法錯誤><" 能請大大們幫忙修一下嗎,謝謝您們了!

這是讀書心得,有400字,但發現一次無法貼完,所以...

這只是一小部分而已,如有興趣***,並到我的發問,去找後面沒法貼到這篇的文章,謝謝您們! (it is called part 1)

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fancy time(dream world)

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big ole world. 文法錯? 還是...?

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  • 妤德
    Lv 6
    8 年前
    最佳解答

    Book : Alice in Wonderland

    The book is full of fantasies .It it comes true in real life,

    I bet it will be very interesting!

    I think the writer who wrote the book is excellent !

    Nowadays , everyone is busy in their work without any rests ,

    they should take their steps slower.

    To enjoy the fancy time(dream world).

    Thinking impossible things is not that easy ,

    but it is the power that makes the world keeps advancing.

    So we should keep thinking impossible things ,

    and not just be a same old bitter person.

    It will be helpful for yourself and the big whole world.

    The story also teaches us everyone is different from one another ,

    you couldn't know what other people is thinking about.

    So just be yourself , everyone is the special !

    About kindness , I believe everybody should have a kind heart originally ,

    but it is probably destroyed by the cruel world or yourself.

    What a cruel world it is! If we can treat others with our kindness heart ,

    the world will be changed , it won't be this... cruel and brutal.

    2013-08-18 12:27:53 補充:

    Big whole world=整個世界

    參考資料: myself
  • 恩,我想我知道您的意思,的確...

  • 匿名使用者
    8 年前

    請鑑別回答1的正確性後

    再談其他

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