初級英檢作文 ..
請幫我改改下面英文錯誤的地方 ..
請告訴我應該怎樣寫會比較順暢 ..
滿分五分這樣寫大概可以拿幾分?
請告訴我寫的文章中文法的錯誤!!
那個 .. 句子沒有連在一起就別見怪了(指
我只是想方便各位大大批改而已(小聲
拜託請告訴我作文裡的「文法錯誤」
不要只有幫我改寫啊
感恩
請問：如果俺把題目的圖片跟大家講，大大們會比較好修改我的作文嗎？
第一張圖片：
一張課程表
第二張圖片：
有一間補習班，周圍有很多學生(?
第三張圖片：
主角準備上床睡覺，時鐘顯示晚上十一點。
My school life is very busy because I have a lot of things to do every day.
I always have four class at morning and another three in the afternoon.
After school, I have to go to the cram to learn another things.
I go to bed at eleven o'clock every day.
What a busy day is!
補習班是cram，還是 .. 有別的名稱(?
3 個解答
- 妤德Lv 68 年前最佳解答
版大您好：
以下是已經修改的文章，請參考看看～若有疑問，歡迎跟我說噢！＾＾
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because I have a lot of things to do every day.
I always have four classes in the morning,
and another three in the afternoon.
After school, I have to go to the cram school to learn other things.
I go to bed at eleven o'clock every day.
What a busy life !
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解析：
1. 因為four是複數，因此class 要加s：four classes.
2. 補習班的英文：cram school / after-school class.
3. another=另一個，other=其他。如果寫：learn another things=學另一個事。
因此用other：learn other things=學其它是。是不是比較好呢？
4. What a busy day=真是忙碌的一天。但你第一句是說你的學校生活很忙碌。
因此用 What a busy life=真是忙碌的生活，比較妥當噢！
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希望對你有幫助！有任何的意見歡迎跟我說～～ＸＤＤ
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參考資料： ＴＥＲ～的英文經驗＋知識：）））
