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A trip to Keelung

Dear diary,

Today I go to Keelung with my mother and sister ,

we go there by train,

I didn't take train for a long time,

so I am very excited,

we go there to eat roast squid and my favorite food oyster omelet,

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  • 8 年前
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    A trip to Keelung

    Dear diary,

    Today I went to Keelung with my mother and sister.

    We went there by train.

    I haven't taken train for a long time, so I am very excited.

    We went there to eat roast squid and my favorite food oyster omelet.

    已經過去的事情必須用"過去式",不要整篇都用逗點

    We also went to Keelung Harbor and took a ship. I saw many dolphins in the ocean. It was the first time I saw dolphins, so I was very delighted.

    I really had a great fun today and I hope I could go there again.

    以上回答,希望您會滿意!!!

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  • 8 年前

    (1)Since eating are fixed,I can't eat at Li Hu Cakestore,Temple Plaza&Night Market!

    (2)We went to Fairy Cave shrines.

    (3)We started at YM Oceanic Culture&Art Museum to see ancient vessels well presented.

    (4)We worshipped at the Qingan Temple dedicated to Mazu deities.We also worshipped at the Dianji Temple dedicated to Sage King Kaizhang.

    (5)We went to Guanyin Statue in Zhongzheng Park to get a view of the city;and Keelung Harbour and went home.

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