Mouse 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

初級英檢作文(急急急

請幫我改改下面英文錯誤的地方 ..

請告訴我應該怎樣寫會比較順暢 ..

滿分五分這樣寫大概可以拿幾分?

請告訴我寫的文章中文法的錯誤!!

那個 .. 句子沒有連在一起就別見怪了(指

我只是想方便各位大大批改而已(小聲

拜託請告訴我作文裡的「文法錯誤」

不要只有幫我改寫啊

感恩

第一張圖片:

一個媽媽正在煮早餐給孩子吃

第二張圖片:

嬤嬤上街去採買晚餐的材料

第三張圖片:

媽媽正在教孩子們寫功課

My mother is a very important person to me.

Every morning, my mother gets up and makes breakfast for me.

When I ate my mother makes, I was very happiness.

Then, my mother went to supermarket to buy some food for dinner.

After dinner, my mother teaches me homework and study with me.

Finally, I go to bed and she will kiss my face and say good night to me.

What a great and nice mother is!

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  • 7 年前
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    My mother is a very important person to me.

    Every morning, my mother gets up and makes breakfast for me.

    When I ate my mother makes, I was very happiness.

    Then, my mother went to supermarket to buy some food for dinner.

    After dinner, my mother teaches me homework and study with me.

    Finally, I go to bed and she will kiss my face and say good night to me.

    What a great and nice mother is!

    My mother is a very important person to me.

    Every morning, my mother gets up early and prepares breakfast for me.

    Everyday when I'm eating the breakfast my mother prepares for me, I am full of happiness.

    In the afternoon, my mother goes to the supermarket to buy some food for dinner.

    The dinner she cooks, is always so delicious. I love it so much.

    After eating dinner, my mother helps me with my homework, and teaches me the parts that I don't understand.

    She is such a kind mother, I love her so much.

    不好意思可能就麻煩你自己找錯誤了

    因為初學者不能用顏色分辨

    其實初級不難

    句子通順簡單即可

    中級才需較注意句子

    但最忌諱文法錯誤

    你也有些段落與段落不能連貫

    我有幫你改了

    麻煩你看一下囉

    參考資料: 考過的自己
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