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發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

[英文]段落翻譯 中譯英

題目 : 小時候,我和鄰居John同校。那時我們常一起打籃球,度過許多快樂時光。畢業以後,他和家人移居到國外。從此我們就失去連絡了。

我第一次的答案 : In the early time,John and I studied in the same school.We played basketball together and had lots of good time.But John and his family immergrated to abroad when we graduated.Since then,we had been disconnet.

GOOGLE的翻譯 : Child, My neighbors and John the same school. Then we often play basketball together, spending a lot of joy. After graduation, he and his family emigrated to foreign countries. Since then we have lost contact with it.

參考google後我的改正 : In the early time,my neighbor,John and I were in the same school.We often played basketball together and had lots of good time.After graduation, he and his family immigrated to foreign countries.Since then I have lost contact with him.

我想要問的是

我第一次寫的答案有哪些用詞可以保留?

改正後的翻譯是否還有需要再改正的空間?希望大家可以幫忙指正

這題目最完整的翻譯答案是?(也就是希望大家說出自己的答案

最近在準備中級英檢的複試,如果可以的話希望大家能夠幫忙

非常感謝各位!

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  • 妤德
    Lv 6
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    版大第一次的答案 : In the early time,John and I studied in the same school.We played basketball together and had lots of good time.But John and his family immergrated to abroad when we graduated.Since then,we had been disconnet.

    修改過的答案: In the early time,John and I studied in the same school.We often played basketball together and had lots of good time.But John and his family immigrated to another country when we graduated.Since then,we had been

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    參考google後我的改正 : In the early time,my neighbor,John and I were in the same school.We often played basketball together and had lots of good time.After graduation, he and his family immigrated to foreign countries.Since then I have lost contact with him.

    參考版大的修改本人再修改: In the early time,my neighbor,John and I were in the same school.We often played basketball together and had lots of good time.After graduation, he and his family immigrated to a foreign country .Since then I lost contact with him.

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    本人自己翻譯:When I was young, I study in the same school with John, my neighbor. We often play basketball together and had lots of good time. After we graduated, his family and he immigrated to another country. Since then, I lost contact with him.

    若還有疑問歡迎跟我說~也歡迎各位大大提出意見!

    參考資料: TER******的英文知識
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  • 7 年前

    A child, my neighbor John the same school. Then we often play basketball together, spending a lot of joy. After graduation, he and his family emigrated to foreign countries. Since then we have lost contact.

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  • 7 年前

    你好~希望我的回答有幫到你:)

    When I was a kid, my neighbor John and I studied in the same school. We often played basketball together, and were having lots of fun. After we graduated, John and his family emigrated to foreign countries. Since then I lost contact with him.

    其實我覺得你原本的也很不錯, 只是建議不要用But開頭,考試這是會扣分的喔!

    然後還有不要太相信Google翻譯,Google翻譯拿來翻譯單字很不錯,但是句子就不要囉~文法會怪怪的

    :)

    參考資料: 住在加拿大4年
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  • Shuang
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    參考google後我的改正 : In the early time,my neighbor,John and I were in the same school.We often played basketball together and had lots of good time.After graduation, he and his family immigrated to foreign country.Since then I have lost in contact with him.

    google 修正後,再修正 country, 因為是移居到另外一個國家居住,除非有知道有到很多國家居住,否則,應是 country, 非 countries. 而連絡是 in contact with.

    2013-09-15 10:24:21 補充:

    coorect: 遷居國外 emigrated.

    參考資料: me, me
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