QQ 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 8 年前

急~~請英文高手幫忙檢查文法

I had three working experience at student’s period.The first job was a part-time job in a bank.My second job was an administrative assistant at the XXX company .My work was about general word processing, assisted competent to handle administrative work, and assisted in business processing reports or contracts. My third job was an assistant at XXX lawyer office of patent department. My work was Japanese Word Processing .In the process of these work, I had learned how to get along with others and face attitude.

請各位英文高手幫忙檢查文法是否有錯誤,

或者是有其它更好的表示方式,謝謝~!!

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  • 8 年前
    最佳解答

    已修正如下,有問題請提出。

    I had three working experiences at during my student’s period, my The first job was a part-time job in a bank, My and the second job was an administrative assistant at in the XXX company, my work was about general word processing, assisted the competent to handle administrative work, and assisted in business processing reports or contracts. My The third job was an assistant at in the patent department of the XXX lawyer office of patent department, my work was Japanese word processing. In the process of dealing with these works(指多項工作時,應有複數), I had learned how to get along with others and face attitude face challenges (或是 suitable working attitude 或是 the attitude of facing the public).1. 我的第二項工作是某公司的行政助理,我的工作是…………,後句的文意接續於前句,是在講述同一件事,事未表達完畢,其間勿隨意加句點,後一個”my”應為小寫,其前使用逗點。2. 我在那家公司工作,通常都說” work in the XXX company” 介系詞使用in 或 for, 而 at多用於表示地點,如I am working at Chung-Sun district of Taipei city.3. 我在某家律師事務所的專利部門工作,通常小的單位置於前面,它所屬的大單位放於後面,而以of連接兩者。

  • 珮珊
    Lv 5
    8 年前

    I had three working experiences at during my student’s period. My first job was a part-time job in a bank and my second was an administrative assistant at XXX. My work was about general word processing, and I assisted in handling administrative work and processing business reports and contracts.

    2013-09-21 05:15:09 補充:

    My third job was as an assistant at XXX lawyer office of patent department, where I did Japanese Word Processing. From doing this work I have learned how to get along with others and face their attitude problems.

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