匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

英文求職信 請幫我修正文法

Dear xxx

I was very excited to hear your company is looking for a position of Project Management; I have enclosed attachment including resume, project portfolio and one of proposal for your consideration. (( 我想表明附件我有附上我的履歷、作品及其中一項提案說明供您考慮))

I believe that I have enough knowledge and experience to do this job and I understand that I will need to learn the specific methods employee by other company. I think in addition to speak and write both Mandarin and English fluently and I'm confident I can make a similar contribution at Impact International. As a project management, I feel that my greatest strengths are my proven track record of delivering projects on time and within budget as well as my extensive experience in business project management. . I talked with people all over the world both in English and Mandarin almost every day. However, my responsibility including manage allocated clients and communicate regularly and building a relationship. I loved it and I believe that getting to know our clients and making them feel care and comfortable. On the other hand, it would be help generate new business.

My biggest strength is tenacity. All my past colleagues and boss have said I am tenacious. I have to see a project through to the finish no matter what challenges I encounter along the way. I always give whatever it takes to complete the job. And I think organizational and team working and Self-disciplined with a proactive attitude are very important. I am confident that I can be a valuable member in my company.

I will be looking forward to hearing from you and speaking with you soon to discuss the exact requirements of the position and thank you for taking the time to consider my application.

以上再麻煩各位幫我看看還有甚麼地方需要修改會更順暢

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear xxx

    I am very pleased to learn that the company is looking for someone to fill the position of Project Manager. I sincerely hope to have the opportunity to be considered for the position. For your reference, I have enclosed my resume, project portfolio, and a proposal.

    I believe with my knowledge and previous work experience that I'm well qualified for the position. With the understanding that I would need to learn more specific methods employed at your company. Additionally, my bi-lingual ability to speak and write in both Mandarin and English fluently. I'm confident that I will make a similar contribution at Impact International. As a project manager, I feel that my greatest strengths are my proven track record of delivering projects in a timely matter, and well within projected budget. As well as in my extensive experience in business project management, I am able to communicate with people from all over the world. Moreover, my job responsibilities include; management on allocated clients, regular communication, and client relation building. I believe that getting to know our clients and making them feel well cared for, is essential to generate new business.

    My greatest strength is tenacity. All my former colleagues and employer have said that I am tenacious to see a project through to the finish, no matter what challenges I encounter along the way. I always give whatever it takes to complete the job. And I think organization, team working, and self-disciplined with a proactive attitude, are all very important. Therefore, I am confident that I can be of a valuable member in your company.

    I look forward to speaking with you soon to discuss the exact requirements of the position. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.

    2013-09-21 18:10:47 補充:

    幾乎照你原義,沒改太多。只是你的英文文法還是稍微帶有國語的文法在哦... 祝你求職順利!

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    瞭解一次、多一次的保障。尋找八大行業工作。必須謹慎小心一點。

    小巴常說:保險跟冒險只差一個字,意義卻是大不同!

    一通電話、一次詢問。都是為自己的著想。

  • 6 年前

    基本上這個文章前段像基金廣告 在英文履歷表是不恰當的

    與其在求職信上用pofotilio 不如用perfomance

    其他修辭學上有些要加強 太多簡單句需要連接詞

    Michael Chen

  • Shuang
    Lv 7
    6 年前

    revised as follows:

    I believe that I have enough knowledge and experience to do this job and I understand that I will need to learn the specific methods from employee by other company. I think in addition to speak and write both Mandarin and English fluently and I'm confident I can make a similar contribution at Impact International. As a project management, I feel that my great strengths are my proven track record of delivering projects on time and within budget as well as my extensive experiences in business project management. . I talked with people all over the world both in English and Mandarin almost every day. However, my responsibility including manage allocated clients and communicate regularly and build up a relationship. I loved it and I believed that getting to know our clients and making them feel care and comfortable. On the other hand, it would be help generate new business.

    My great strength is tenacity. All my past colleagues and boss have said I am tenacious. I have to see a project through to the finish no matter what challenges I encounter along the way. I always give whatever it takes to complete the job. And I think organization and team working and Self-disciplined with a proactive attitude are very important. I am confident that I can be a valuable member in my company.

    I will be looking forward to hearing from you and speaking with you soon to discuss the exact requirements of the position and thank you for taking the time to consider my application.

    2013-09-21 17:43:11 補充:

    correct:

    And I think origanizational and team working and self-disciplined with a procative attitude is very important.

    2013-09-22 14:19:33 補充:

    I was very excited to hear your company is looking for a position of Project Management; I have enclosed attachment including resume, project portfolio and one of proposal for your consideration.

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