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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

能幫我修改一下這篇小作文嗎 20+

小弟的文法非常之爛(大概國中程度都不到),還先請見諒!

做文的題目是:我的暑假

This is my first summer vacation since i go to university,but i am not get exciting about this actually,because of my mom still have to work,she is too busy to make any plan for take vacation or something like that.

Even so,i am not going to waste my summer time,because of my house is close to National Sun Yat-sen University,and i have been study in their library,there are lot of helpful book for me and comfortable environment,i decide go to the library every day and keep study English.

Although it is seem kind of boring vacation,in fact,it is really helpful for me,my major was English when i was in high school,since i go to university,i have not keep study English too much,i am so glad that my habit of read English magazine is come back again.

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很多時態應該都用錯了 麻煩各位大大幫忙看看@@

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看文章或單字都還可以 cnn新聞大意也還能了解 但文法真的就亂糟糟了

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    以下本人編修僅供參考:

    This was my first summer vacation since I went to university. Nevertheless, I was not actually very excited. This was because we did not have any plans for vacation or something like that because my mom still had to work.

    Even so, I was not going to waste my summer time. My house was close to National Sun Yat-sen University and I used to study there. As a result, I knew there were a lot of helpful book for me in its library and the environment was comfortable. So I decided to go to the library every day to keep on studying English.

    Although it seems a kind of boring vacation, it is, in fact, really helpful to me. Despite majoring in English in high school, I did not keep on study English in some ways after I went to college. Now I am so glad that I can recollect my habit of reading English magazine.

    2013-10-07 03:23:47 補充:

    helpful books

    2013-10-07 14:01:26 補充:

    倒數第二句

    I did not keep on study English:

    study 應為 studying

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  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    瞭解一次、多一次的保障。尋找八大行業工作。必須謹慎小心一點。

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  • 7 年前

    主修英語 竟然 (大概國中程度都不到)? 吃驚 吃驚!

    不過我看妳寫得還好嘛!

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  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

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