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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

求助,為我的reflection改短字數

我做reflection寫了1400多字,但原來只是要500字,最多510-520字,現在傻了,不知如何刪,所以可否幫忙改短至500字,將最精要point寫出來做reflection作答.thanks

i need to write a reflection of 400 to 500 words on the article 'air pollution in chin the kids aren't alright', in my report i should include:

How does pollution affect the children in china?

What are the health problems arise to the young and elderly?

What can be done to improve the pollution in China?

In your opinion, What are the challenges the Chinese have to overcome when improving the problem of pollution?Give other comments about pollution in china?

reflection:

There are some reasons why air pollution affects the children in China, because they are developing in their lungs stage,but not strong enough to fight infection yet.Also the behaviour attitude is that they are spending more time outdoor,breathing deeper in consumption,exhaustion.

The elderly are vulnerable to air pollution and they can't compensate for the damaged harmful effects. It means heart attack,strike, chronics, asthma, and diabetes etc.which need various medical treatment.

The goverment should layout and enforce new regulations on clean air quality and gasoline emission standards. New regulations on air and gasoline emission standards are worth 100 billion yuans for the next three years to tackle Beijing's problems.China's Premier has vowed to clean up the environment and even asked the public to hold him accountable!However officials and businessmen have tried to go round and steer clear of Central government's environment problem and policy.Hence China government must reform its system to stop corruption and comply with justice now.

In fact, China is a big place and is quite densely populated, hence, it is rather difficult to avoid pollution s such as air pollution and rubbish pollution in China, because the rapidly development of business environment especially the rapidly growth of industrial production.

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I think the most effective way to deal with this problem is to educate them to buy useful things, so as to reduce the amount of wastes. In addition, they ought to use permanent apparatuses instead of the disposable .

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Of course, they have to be cooperative if the authority want to carry it out successfully. Let's try our best to save our lovely and wonderful Earth.

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    其實你應該是算錯字數了, 你這篇文章不到500個單字. 1400應該是字元數,比如說

    pollution 有9個字元, 但是只算一個字. 如果你要的是500字元數, 以下改好的剛好500字元(不含空白):

    The children are susceptible to air pollution because their lungs are still developing and not strong enough to fight against the exhaust. The elderly are vulnerable to air pollution and can't compensate for many diseases. The Chinese government should make regulations on clean air quality and gasoline emission standards. In fact, it is rather difficult to avoid pollution because of the rapid growth of business environment in China. The most effective way to deal with this problem is to educate people to use permanent apparatuses instead of the disposable to reduce the amount of wastes.

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