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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

英文句子改錯

Dear alice:

How are you. I am from Taiwan. Today are my first day in school. my school are big and beautiful. miss Lin is my English teacher. mr Wang is my homeroom teacher. They is very nice. I live my new classmates. They are very nice to me. i am very happy now. Hope you is well.

Your fiend,Ivy.

求英文好的人幫忙找出10個錯誤..

謝謝..

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  • 7 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Alice:

    How are you? I am from Taiwan. Today is my first day in school.

    My school is big and beautiful. Miss Lin is my English teacher.

    Mr. Wang is my homeroom teacher. They are very nice.

    I love my new classmates. They are very nice to me.

    I am very happy now. Hope you are well.

    Your friend,Ivy.

    2013-10-10 20:35:15 補充:

    謝謝Evolved Panda發表的意見.

    Today is my first day in school.應將in改為at

    ter******的回答中有個小瑕疵,mr應改為Mr.

    因為Mr.是mister的簡寫,不能只寫為"Mr"

    而發問者你所需要注意的是,be動詞的單複數.

    be動詞的單複數要視主詞為單數或複數來使用.

    此外就沒有什麼問題了,此篇文章總共有13個錯誤,

    有些應該是打錯字而已,如果還有問題的話請再發問.

    若最佳解答不是我的話,請預先通知我.

    在我移除解答後再選最佳解答,謝謝.

    2013-10-10 20:42:04 補充:

    補充給提問者:

    Dear Alice:這裡的冒號要改為逗號

    >>>Dear Alice, 這是寫書信體時常犯的錯誤,要注意.

    這篇文章共有14個錯誤.

  • 7 年前

    First day (in) school???

    Try first day (at) school.

    2013-10-10 20:29:40 補充:

    Fiend 是個單字沒錯,意思是惡魔。

  • 妤德
    Lv 6
    7 年前

    Dear Alice :

    人名的首字母要大寫

    How are you?

    這是疑問句所以要用問號

    I am from Taiwan.

    Today is my first day in school.

    My school is big and beautiful.

    Miss Lin is my English teacher.

    Mr Wang is my homeroom teacher.

    They are very nice.

    They 是複數因此要用are.

    I love my new classmates.

    live是活的意思

    應該改成love:喜愛的意思

    They are very nice to me.

    I am very happy now.

    Hope you are well.

    Your friend ,Ivy.

    fiend不是個英文單字

    應是拼錯了

    正確是:friend(朋友)

    *************************************************************

    希望以上的答案對您有幫助

    若有疑問歡迎提出

    :)))

    PS:

    若我不是最佳解答

    煩請提前通知

    以便我提前移除答案

    希望您能配合我的作法

    謝謝:)

    2013-10-10 20:31:26 補充:

    哈哈哈

    那麼信的內容就變成:

    ''你的惡魔,艾薇''

    參考資料: 我自己的頭腦
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