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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

請幫我翻譯兩則日記(中翻英)[20點]

diary 1

禮拜六我跟我朋友去打漆彈,這真的很累(我覺的打一場15分鐘左右的比賽,所消耗的體力可能不下於半場的全場籃球比賽,我打完睡了10小時).-而且我很多地方瘀青了,不過這真的非常刺激有趣

diary 2

禮拜天雖然我沒買票去小巨蛋看NBA熱身賽,但我還是準時守在電視機前,

我想我其實有些緊張,因為我有點擔心林書豪近鄉情怯, 但林書豪的表現真的可圈可點, 連很少機會看到的大火鍋(苦主Danny Granger )都出現了, 好久沒有看到林書豪打得這麼開心了, 很為他高興,順帶一提,魔獸真的打得有夠爛的, 去拜師歐拉朱旺還是沒有進步, 感覺學費白繳了。

以下是我的試譯,亦可直接更正:

1.

Last Saturday, I had a paintball competitions with my friend. Although it's very tiring, (i

think paintball game consumes an enormous amount of physical energy, a 15 minutes paint game maybe is not easy than a 20 minutes basketball game, and after the game, i sleep almost 10 hours!)and II had bruises on my body, but it's really fun and exciting.

2.

Last sunday, I didn't buy the ticket for the NBA preseason game at Taipei Arena, But I stayed in front of the television on time for the game. Actually i was kind of nervous before the game, because I'm worry that Jeremy would get nervous in front of his folks(完全亂翻), however, Jeremy play very well, I was surprised by Jeremy's big block on Danny Granger . I haven't seen Jeremy played so happily for a long time. I was really pleased for him. By the way, I think Dwight Howard played terribly in that game. There is no progress for him, esp. low post, i think he's waste the tuition fee for Hakeem Olajuwan's training class

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    老大, 你願意自己試翻真的是可圈可點; 就讓Panda來幫你修正吧! (請誤刪題, 阿彌陀佛!) 粗體底線 – 修改過的字 ( )內的字 – 不需要 ( )內的字 – 解說/意見

    Last Saturday, I had a paintball competition(單數) with my friend. Although it was(過去式) very tiring, and I had bruises on my body, (but) it was(過去式) really fun and exciting(句子前段用although/even though/though時, 後段不可加but). (I (請愛用大寫) think paintball (game) consumes an enormous amount of physical energy - a 15 minute session(minute跟session在這裡可當作一個字, 所以minute不需用複數) equates to about 20 minutes of basketball match; (and)after the game, I slept for nearly 10 hours!)(我將括弧移到句子後端才不會打亂它的流暢度)

    Last Sunday, I didn't buy the ticket for the NBA preseason game at Taipei Arena, but I was on time for the game on television(不流暢, 所以徹底改過). Actually, I was kind of nervous before the game, because I was(過去式) worried(被動) that Jeremy would get nervous in front of the Taiwan fans(台灣實在不算是他的家鄉, 因為他是在美國生的); however, Jeremy played very well! I was surprised by Jeremy's big block on Danny Granger. I hadn't seen him (前面已提過是Jeremy, 這裡用代名詞he就可以才不會囉嗦) play so merrily for a long time, so I was really happy(用詞不當所以幫你改過) for him. By the way, I think Dwight Howard played terribly in that game. He made no progress at all, especially(寫文章時請誤用縮寫) on low post; I think he totally wasted the tuition fee for Hakeem Olajuwan's training class. 重整如下: Last Saturday, I had a paintball competition with my friend. Although it was very tiring, and I had bruises on my body, it was really fun and exciting.(I think paintball consumes an enormous amount of physical energy - a 15 minute session equates to about 20 minutes of basketball match; after the game, I slept for nearly 10 hours!)

    Last Sunday, I didn't buy the ticket for the NBA preseason game at Taipei Arena, but I was on time for the game on television. Actually, I was kind of nervous before the game, because I was worried that Jeremy would get nervous in front of the Taiwan fans; however, Jeremy played very well!

    寫不下 = - = 放在意見欄 希望有幫助..

    2013-10-15 11:32:44 補充:

    I was surprised by Jeremy's big block on Danny Granger. I hadn't seen him play so merrily for a long time, so I was really happy for him. By the way, I think Dwight Howard played terribly in that game.

    2013-10-15 11:32:51 補充:

    He made no progress at all, especially on low post; I think he totally wasted the tuition fee for Hakeem Olajuwan's training class.

    參考資料: Panda - fat & simple
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  • 5 年前

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  • 6 年前

    diary 1On Saturday me and my friends went to play paintball, it's really very tired (I think around a 15-minute game, physical strength may be consumed by no less than half of full-court basketball games, I play 10 hours of sleep.)-and I'm bruised in many places, but it's really very exciting fun

    diary 2Sunday, even though I didn't buy a ticket to a small domed NBA warm-up game, but I still kept on time in front of the TV,I wanted to I actually some tension, because I somewhat worried Lin near nostalgia inhibited, but Lin of performance really of worthy, even rarely opportunities see of fires pot (victims Danny Granger) are appeared has, long no see Lin hit have so happy has, is for he happy, passing a mention, Warcraft really of hit have has enough rotten of, to apprentice oulazhuwang also is no progress, feels tuition white paid has.

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