大學生 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

--急--請幫審閱英文簡歷是否適切,謝謝!

各位英文大大您們好:

I am really confident to my work attitude. Inaddition, I am also a responsible person, if my supervisor needs me to do extra job, I will definitely accept it as well no matter when I can get off work. Ialso had some work experiences at the supermarket, so I think I can do well inthe service industry and how to receive my customers. I truly believe that my experienceand excellent work attitude will be beneficial to my position if the employerhires me.

我對我自己的工作態度非常的有信心,我也認為我是個有責任感的,無論是否會延遲下班,我都會將該完成的事情做完,我也曾在超市有些打工的經驗,所以我認為我必能在服務業表現突出,也學會了如何與客戶相處,因此我誠心的相信,若能被雇主錄取,我的經驗和優秀的工作態度將會有所加分。

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另外詢問:....

With these work experiences, I think I can get all the things done with an efficient method andalso do the things really well. So it will give me an advantage at my position.

句子中的 with these work experineces ((憑著這些工作經驗、有這些工作經驗))

用法有錯嗎@@還是正確呢...?

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是all the country I visited / 還是 all the countries I visited

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謝謝^^!!

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    hello, 大學生你好,

    我幫你稍微修改一下喔..你參考看看:

    我一直相信, 態度決定高度. 我曾在超市有過打工的經驗, 除了學會如何和客戶應對, 我也瞭解責任感在服務業的重要性. 有時因為工作的需要, 必須耽誤到下班的時間, 我總是會先把該做的事情做完才離開. 如果有幸被錄取, 我一定會努力學習, 讓自己成為公司的資產.

    I always believe that attitude determines altitude. I used to work in a supermarket as a part-time job. Through the work experience, I learned how to deal with customers properly, and moreover, I realized how important responsibility is to work in the service industry. I always had my job completely done even I might get off work late. If I have the opportunity to work in your company, I will learn as much as I can and make myself an asset to the company.

    其他問題:

    With the work experience, ...

    All the countries I visited ...

  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

    瞭解一次、多一次的保障。尋找八大行業工作。必須謹慎小心一點。

    小巴常說:保險跟冒險只差一個字,意義卻是大不同!

    一通電話、一次詢問。都是為自己的著想。

  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

    努力不一定會成功~~但有金錢幫忙更能朔造成功!!

    傳播小姐-飯局公關-禮服店-便服店-鋼琴酒吧-國外線

    請上網收詢-*****介紹八大行業

    如果可以不要來這行上班就不要來~畢竟八大行業還是深色場合~~

    還是有心酸的地方~我的網站上面都有介紹~~

    其實在上班,跟一般的工作都是一樣會有職業的危險性存在,那只要我們瞭解工作會遇到那些常發生的危險時,就可以盡可能的去防範,如此一來就能將職業傷害隆到最低了。

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