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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

SPEECH英文抓錯(急)

*hello,everyone.today I want to tell about my experience in the ncku physical camp.

I went to the camp on this winter vacation.

Q-NCKU學校名直接放在營隊名稱前頭可嗎?是用PHYSICAL or PHYSICS?參加營隊的參加英文用…?

**at first, I didn't have the specific department to join.

I just surfed their websites at will,and I filled out four application forms in total.

After I sent my application forms , I surfed their websites carefully.

I discovered the courses of the physical camp are more interesting and its 總召 is more handsome than the others.

Q-是用WEBSITE嗎?總召的英文是…?

***So,I prayed everyday that I could go to the physical camp.

Finally(or In the end ?),I was luckily recruited the four camps at the same time.

I felt very nervous when I saw many students from far and near.We sat in a circle and playing games with awkwardly silent.

Q-來自四面八方的學生英文怎說?紅色字請一定要幫我抓錯><

****But to my surprise,when our team began to crash a barrier,everyone shouted crazily and we got no.1(得到第一名)

Q-闖關的英文@@? 得到第一名 如何翻最順呢?

*****The thirth day is my favorite day.Early in the morning,we went to class with sleepiness,everyone felt tired,but when the teacher came in,our sleepiness all disappeared.

And girls who were in our team rejoiced covertly that we sat in the first row.So I focused(concentrated) on the class.And learning much.

Q-暗自竊喜 的英文如何說?學了很多 的英文怎說呢?

******Although everyone didn’t know each other originally,but we gave care and love to each other.

Q-我們給了彼此如同家人的愛和關懷 英文如何翻?

It has been nine months that we don’t meet’but everyone still share recent devolopements and get in touch.

請高手快來幫幫我><絕對不要用GOOGLE翻譯噢!

紅字是我覺得翻得很不好的,黑字也一定有小錯

懇請仔細幫忙揪錯QAQ

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    *hello,everyone.today I want to telltalk about my experience in the NCKU physicalPhysics Camp that I attended I went to the camp onduring this winter vacation.

    參加營隊的參加英文用…? 可用 attend or participate in or go to

    **at first, I didn't havefavor the any specific departmentcamp. to join

    I just surfed their (whose?) websites at will,and I filled out four application forms in total.

    After I sent my application forms , I surfed their websites carefully.

    I discovered the courses of the physicals camp are more interesting and its 總召 is more handsome than the others.

    此段我看不太懂, 你是只瀏覽NCKU的網頁, 從中選一個營隊來參加? 還是...

    For your reference,

    At first, I didn't favor any specific camp to attend. I just surfed the Internet at will and I found several winter camps at NCKU. So, I filled out four applications in total. After sending all these (applications), I carefully re-studied their websites and discovered the courses of the physics camp more interesting. Moreover, the leader of which was more handsome than the others.

    Q-是用WEBSITE嗎? 應該可以

    總召的英文是…? 不知道, 我用 leader

    ***So,I prayed everyday that I could go to the physicalphysics camp.

    Finally(or In the end ?都可),I was luckily recruited the four camps (這裡我不知道這樣寫有沒有問題, 看有沒有人能回答) at the same time.

    I felt very nervous when I saw many students from far and near.

    We sat in a circle and playing games with awkwardly silent.

    Q-來自四面八方的學生英文怎說? 字典查到的例句跟你寫的一樣是from far and near, 我沒用過, 我可能會簡單用 from everywhere.

    ****But to my surprise,when our team began to crash a barrier,everyone shouted crazily and we got no.1(得到第一名)

    Q-闖關的英文@@? 我不知道, 看有沒有人能回答

    得到第一名 如何翻最順呢? 我也不知道怎樣最順, we got the first place, we won the first prize, we took the first in the game. 我可能會用 won the first prize吧. 很清楚. the no 1 聽起來也不錯.

    *****The thirththird day (at the camp) is my favorite day.Early in the morning,we went to class with sleepiness barely awake (此段用了兩次sleepiness, 可以改別的說法), everyone felt tired, but when (或者 as soon as 比較生動) the teacher came in, our sleepiness all (all 換成suddenly比較生動) disappeared.

    2013-10-30 03:09:57 補充:

    剩下的內容在

    http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com//question/question?q...

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  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

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  • 7 年前

    In your case, “browsed” their website" 恐怕要比 “surfed...”要合適一點。

    2013-10-30 05:20:51 補充:

    來自四面八方的學生...students from all different places.

    2013-10-30 05:26:14 補充:

    闖關:break the barrier; 或是 break the obstacle 都可以。

    得到第一名 won the first place, or "We came in first" or simply "we won".

    2013-10-30 05:28:42 補充:

    暗自竊喜 We cheered privately; we were delighted deep down.

    2013-10-30 05:32:18 補充:

    我們給了彼此如同家人的愛和關懷 ~ (Although we were strangers at the beginning), we loved and cared for one another in the next few days, and became a family.

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