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My future goals

I want to make my living from shipping industry since i am a junior high school student.

Because that can make me feel i was connect with the world, another reason is there are a huge

harbor of the world in my hometown. I think if i am really work in the shipping indusrty company

that I have a lots of opportunity stay in Kaohsiung to look after my family and meet my friends.

Although I have been thinking about work in Taipei, my life will be more different. the most perfect

of situation was work in Kaohsiung and from Taipei.

I have never to think about to be a rich man or something like that, more money which mean you have more work

to do and have no time to enjoy everything of lifes, It is short time in our life, it must has

something are to deserve to find and see.

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  • 6 年前
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    My future goals

    I have wanted determined to make my living from shipping industry since I am was a junior high school student. Because that can make made me feel I was connect with the world, another reason is was there are is one of world’s a huge harbors of the world in my hometown. I think if I am really work in the a shipping industry company in the future, that I will have a lots of opportunity to stay in Kaohsiung to look after my family and meet my friends at the same time . 1. 現在完成式 + since “自從……起,我即已…… 。2. 單數使用 there is , 複數使用 there are.3. Work in a shipping company, 未來的事是不確定的,不可使用定冠詞。

    Although I have been thinking about working in Taipei, but my life will be more different than the perfect situation that mentioned above of situation was work in Kaohsiung and from Taipei.

    1.about後須接名詞或分詞、動名詞。 I have never to think thought about to being a rich man or something other statuses like that, because making more money which means you will have more work to do and have no time to enjoy everything of your life, It is short the time in our lives is short, nevertheless, it must has always there is something in our world are to deserved to find and see. 1. enjoy everything of life, life生活、生命, 本就意含在其中的所有事物,不必再寫everything,而且工作忙未必就無法享受一切,很多人就在享受所得到的金錢、地位、物質,所以寫出life即可,享受不享受,享受到什麼,由讀者自行認定。

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