英文自傳 誰來幫我修改 .

Hello everyone, my name is XX X , I come from taitung . I am graduate from National Cheng Kung Commercial & Aquaculture Senior Vocational High School and major in Aquaculture Program. There are three people in my family, I have a younger brother sometimes I fight with my brother. My father is tough... 顯示更多 Hello everyone, my name is XX X , I come from taitung . I am graduate from National Cheng Kung Commercial & Aquaculture Senior Vocational High School and major in Aquaculture Program.
There are three people in my family, I have a younger brother sometimes I fight with my
brother. My father is tough man, But he is sweet to me.

In my free time, I think that watching TV can increase my knowledge. comes to television, Ilike to see on the Animal Planet channel and socially relevant news events.
Most people would think that playing online computer will hinder students' learning. But
I think that computers can stimulate us to learn certain things, such as learning concerned with world events .

Although I do not like the English, but i hope that after four years can improve my English
and have the ability to say that the future is very smooth

小弟英文不是很好 因為要上傳個人自傳 但因為英文不好打出來的東西也不太確定 對不對 懇求大大幫我修改
更新: TO ShiUmiYeon :

恩 問過老師 他說可以 , tough 我想表達的是 嚴肅 嚴厲的 。


其他你打出來的 英文 都是大大修改過的麻?

最後一句我想打表達的是 : 我雖然不喜歡英文,但我希望四年後我的英文能力可以提升且外來有能力以英文對話
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