英文心得:檢查翻譯正確與否

下列是我將看一篇Isabel Allende所RPYD英文故事文章

「The Schoolteacher's Guest」的個人opinion。

我把它們翻譯成英文讓我今天下午上台報告表述。

想請問這二段有翻錯嗎,請檢查我的錯誤點。

【第一段心得】

Ines她是一位很偉大的母親,她不會因為自己的兒子被人誤殺就只會一直傷心難過。

她會把關心兒子的行動放在照顧全村村民。

翻英:

Ines is a great mother.

She hasn't been very sad that her son was killed.

She can use the actions that taking of her son change into taking of people of the town.

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【第二段心得】

她把照顧兒子的心擴展到照顧全村村民。

村民們也很尊敬她,視同她是全村的師母。

一般人看自己的母親,會尊敬她。當母親犯錯,我們也會寬容她。

所以像Ines向對方報仇把他殺死,村民們也寬容她,

因為視同她為師母,尊敬師母,所以也寬容師母。

翻英:

She can extend the acions that taking of her son change into taking of people of the town.

She was respected by the town. They thought she was their mentor(恩師) of the town.

When everyone face their mother, they respecting her.

When our mother make a mistake, we will forgive her.

It has been Ines that kill the murderer, everyone of the town forgive her.

They thought she was their mentor, everyone respect her, so they fogive her.

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  • Oreo
    Lv 5
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    【第一段心得】

    Ines她是一位很偉大的母親,她不會因為自己的兒子被人誤殺就只會一直傷心難過。

    她會把關心兒子的行動放在照顧全村村民。

    翻英:

    Ines is a great mother.

    She didn’t keep staying in the sadness because her son got killed by accident.

    She diverted her focus from her son’s death into taking care of people in the town.

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    【第二段心得】

    她把照顧兒子的心擴展到照顧全村村民。

    村民們也很尊敬她,視同她是全村的師母。

    一般人看自己的母親,會尊敬她。當母親犯錯,我們也會寬容她。

    所以像Ines向對方報仇把他殺死,村民們也寬容她,

    因為視同她為師母,尊敬師母,所以也寬容師母。

    翻英:

    She has been taking care of all people in the town like her own son.

    She was respected by all the people in the town and considered as their mentor(恩師)of the town.

    When everyone faces their mother, they respect her.

    When our mother makes a mistake, we eventually forgive her.

    Although Ines killed the murderer, everyone in the town decides to forgive her.

    Since she was respected and considered as their mentor, her mistake wasforgiven.

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    7 年前

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